Hello teacher

2017-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~! Are you feeling okay now? I am really hungry:( i want to eat delicious food!!! After our class i will eat bulgogui Do you know? I really like this food I feel really hungry now!!! Anyway i will write about our homework the question was If you had to give away $1,000 who would you give it to and why? My answere is i will give it to my parents and also donate to the poor people But actully i just don't want to give $1,000 to anyone I just want to use myself:) Now i have to go see you on the class Love you~!

강사 첨삭

HI baby happy Friday!

Thank you for always cheering me up.

You\'re such an angel... I hope you always stay happy.

Take care always and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Good afternoon, teacher~!

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 Are you feeling okay now?

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 I am really hungry:( i want to eat delicious food!!!

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 After our class i will eat bulgogui

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 Do you know? I really like this food

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 I feel really hungry now!!!

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 Anyway i will write about our homework

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 the question was

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 If you had to give away $1,000 who would you give it to and why?

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 My answere is i will give it to my parents and also donate to the poor people 

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 But actully i just don\'t want to give $1,000 to anyone

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 I just want to use myself:)

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 Now i have to go see you on the class

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 Love you~!

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