Hello teacher~!

2017-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Good afternoon, teacher~! I am really tired now :( Today i woke up at 6:00 and go to school at 7:00 I was really tired But it's okay~!!! Because i am going on a camping tomorrow~! So, i am really exciting!! our school is going to have camping So, all of my school student are very exciting Like fashion, style, make up teacher,, i am really really tired now:( Please help me to wake up my sentence it's not good,, i don't know what am i typing now My eyes are more smaller .. Okay now i have to go to sleep.. i think i have to take some rest See you on the class!!!

강사 첨삭

Oh baby I am so sorry you feel very tired today..:(

How I wish I could help you with something...

Hmmm...If you want baby just get some rest for awhile okay?

Call you again later I love you!

xosxoTeacher Cam^^ 

Good afternoon, teacher~!

>>correct
 I am really tired now :(

>>correct
 Today i woke up at 6:00 and go to school at 7:00

>>Today I woke up at 6 am and went to school at 7 am.
 I was really tired

>>correct
 But it\'s okay~!!!

>>correct
 Because i am going on a camping tomorrow~!

>>correct
 So, i am really exciting!!

>>So I am really excited!
 our school is going to have camping

>>Our school will go camping tomorrow.
 So, all of my school student are very exciting

>>So all my classmates are very excited.
 Like fashion, style, make up

>>correct
 teacher,, i am really really tired now:(

>>correct
 Please help me to wake up

>>Please help me stay attentive.
 my sentence it\'s not good,, i don\'t know what am i typing now

>>I think my sentences are not good because I don\'t know what I am typing right now.
 My eyes are more smaller ..

>>My eyes are getting smaller.
 Okay now i have to go to sleep.. i think i have to take some rest

>>correct
 See you on the class!!!

>>See you in class!

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