Hello teacher~!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Oh baby I am so sorry you feel very tired today..:(
How I wish I could help you with something...
Hmmm...If you want baby just get some rest for awhile okay?
Call you again later I love you!
xosxoTeacher Cam^^
Good afternoon, teacher~!
>>correct
I am really tired now :(
>>correct
Today i woke up at 6:00 and go to school at 7:00
>>Today I woke up at 6 am and went to school at 7 am.
I was really tired
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But it\'s okay~!!!
>>correct
Because i am going on a camping tomorrow~!
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So, i am really exciting!!
>>So I am really excited!
our school is going to have camping
>>Our school will go camping tomorrow.
So, all of my school student are very exciting
>>So all my classmates are very excited.
Like fashion, style, make up
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teacher,, i am really really tired now:(
>>correct
Please help me to wake up
>>Please help me stay attentive.
my sentence it\'s not good,, i don\'t know what am i typing now
>>I think my sentences are not good because I don\'t know what I am typing right now.
My eyes are more smaller ..
>>My eyes are getting smaller.
Okay now i have to go to sleep.. i think i have to take some rest
>>correct
See you on the class!!!
>>See you in class!
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