hello teacher~!!

2017-06-02 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher~!!!. Today I will tell you about my day. Today I went to school and I read a book. It was so boring. And I study korean at first class it was not fun too. And at second class i studyed math and it was very fun. And at break time i play baseball. And at third class i had a english class it was very fun fun fun. And at forth class i had a math class it was boring. I ate lunch it was very delicious. At fifth class i had a P.E. class we played soccer. It was the best class.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby!
Happy Friday!
Thank you so much for doing a great job.

I hope you will keep up the good work...

Take care always and have a good night...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher~!!!.

>>correct
 Today I will tell you about my day.

>>correct
 Today I went to school and I read a book.

>>correct

 It was so boring.

>>correct
 And I study korean at first class it was not fun too.

>>I also studied Koreanin my first class and it was not fun.

 And at second class i studyed math and it was very fun.

>>I studied Math next and it was very fun.
 And at break time i play baseball.

>>And at break time I played baseball.

 And at third class i had a english class it was very fun fun fun.

>>I had my English class next it was very fun!
 And at forth class i had a math class it was boring.

>>And in my fourth class I had my Math class and it was boring.

 I ate lunch it was very delicious.

>>correct
 At fifth class i had a P.E. class we played soccer.

>>correct

 It was the best class.

>>correct

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