hello teacher~!!
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강사 첨삭
Hi there baby!
Happy Friday!
Thank you so much for doing a great job.
I hope you will keep up the good work...
Take care always and have a good night...
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hello teacher~!!!.
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Today I will tell you about my day.
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Today I went to school and I read a book.
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It was so boring.
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And I study korean at first class it was not fun too.
>>I also studied Koreanin my first class and it was not fun.
And at second class i studyed math and it was very fun.
>>I studied Math next and it was very fun.
And at break time i play baseball.
>>And at break time I played baseball.
And at third class i had a english class it was very fun fun fun.
>>I had my English class next it was very fun!
And at forth class i had a math class it was boring.
>>And in my fourth class I had my Math class and it was boring.
I ate lunch it was very delicious.
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At fifth class i had a P.E. class we played soccer.
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It was the best class.
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