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hello teacher i didn\'t write about my story for long time ;;

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sorry about that i was really busy on the test

>>I am so sorry about that because I was busy preparing for the test.
 teacher, this is the kind of homework for the school can you help me!!??

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 change the sentence more softly and better, and also grammer too

>>Can you help me modify the sentences? (Observe the proper spelling of the word GRAMMAR)
 see you tomorrow

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 today I read a book named Jake Drake, Teacher\'s Pet 

>>Today I read [red] a book entitled Jake Drake, Teacher\'s Pet.

 This story is about a boy name jake having a problem

>>This story is about a boy named Jake who is having some problems.
 jake drake was just normal student.

>>Jake Drake used to be an ordinary student.

he is middle of fourth grade.

>>He is a fourth year middle school student.

 one day his teacher mr.thompson was being unfair

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 mr thompson picked shawn to read pledge of allegiance, let shawn take the attendance sheet to the office and there is even more.

>>Mr. [Name] picked Shawn to read the Pledge of Allegiance, let him take the attendance sheet to the office and a lot more.

 jake drake thinks it’s not fair.

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but when he noticed teacher was nice to shawn because it was the last day of school to shawn 

>>But he noticed the teacher was nice to him because it\'s his last day of school.
 jake got glad that shawn was not teacher’s pet

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 jake thinks being the teacher’s pet is worst thing that can happen to a kid at school.

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jake know this for sure because jake was one of the teacher\'s pet when he was in third grade

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 it all happened in four days

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