Hello teacher

2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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on Wednesday when teacher called jake to solve the computer problems he just ignored her and read a comic book he also said I think you should have a computer class. very badly but teacher thanks to jake and said she will have a math class with worksheets the students hate worksheets so they kept teasing jake jake did bad things on Wednesday but all teachers just loved jake jake really hate to be a teachers pet... so jake just told his dad about his problem. then he founds the sollution on Thursday jake told his teacher he wants to have a mathclass with the computer. also he told about his friend who are very genius about the computer then jake went to the principal and told her that he doesn’t want to be her pet. principal helped jake she pretended punishing jake infront of all students now nobody thinks that jake is a teacher’s pet the book was very fun. and I can think about my school life again I think I have to behave very nice like jake.

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on Wednesday when teacher called jake to solve the computer problems

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 he just ignored her and read a comic book he also said I think you should have a computer class.

>>correct

very badly but teacher thanks to jake and said she will have a math class with worksheets 

>>But the teacher thanked Jake and said she will have Math class using workbook.
 the students hate worksheets so they kept teasing jake

>>correct
 jake did bad things on Wednesday but all teachers just loved jake

>>correct
 jake really hate to be a teachers pet...

>>correct
 so jake just told his dad about his problem.

>>correct

then he founds the sollution

>>Then he found the solution.
 on Thursday jake told his teacher he wants to have a mathclass with the computer.

>>correct

also he told about his friend who are very genius about the computer

>>correct
 then jake went to the principal and told her that he doesn’t want to be her pet.

>>correct
 principal helped jake 

>>correct
 she pretended punishing jake infront of all students

>>correct
 now nobody thinks that jake is a teacher’s pet

>>correct
 the book was very fun. and I can think about my school life again

>>correct
 I think I have to behave very nice like jake.

>>correct

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