Hello teacher

Hello [이름]! I am really happy that you\'re trying to be great at speaking English and it\'s nice that you\'re good at all kinds of sports! You never seize to amaze me!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts today! I really appreciate it!

En[이름] the rest of your day! ☺

Today I will tell you about my family

>> Today, I will tell you about my family.

I have 1 oler sister and mom,dad.

>> I have one older sister, mom and dad.

My mom and dad is a photographer.

>> My mom and dad are photographers.

They are very kind.

>> CORRECT!

And my sister, she is very bad. Because she always hit me, and it is very painful.

>> However, my sister is very bad because she always hits me and it\'s very painful.

>> However, my sister is nasty because she always hits me and it\'s excruciating.

So I hate my sister and I love my mom and dad.

>> That\'s why I hate my sister but I love my mom and my dad.

>> That\'s why I hate my sister but I love my parents.

And I will introduce my self.

>> I also like to introduce myself.

My favorite sport is soccer,

>> CORRECT!

and I\'m not good at English

>> ... but I\'m not good at English.

But I\'m trying to be great,

>> Although, I\'m trying to be great!

and I\'m good at every sport except swimming.

>> I am also good at all kinds of sports except swimming.