hello teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for Doing your assignment
and thank you for letting me know
some information\'s about your family
keep up the Good Job ^^
Teacher Brian
Hello teacher
>>Hello teacher
It is first time that i write this composition
>>It is my first time to write a composition
I have short time to write this so i will just tell you about my family
>>I don\'t have much time to write this so I will just tell you about my family
as you don\'t know my family
>>as you don\'t know my family,
I have mom,dad and my brother
>>My family is composed of my Mother, Father and a brother,
my dad is a photographer not a police officer
>>my father is a photographer and not a police officer
my mom helps dad to make a great photo
>>while my mother helps my father to make a great photo
my brother is a student he is 14years old he goes to middle school
>>and lastly my brother is a student he is 14years old and he goes to middle school
I like my family but sometime i don\'t like them
>>I love my family but sometimes I don\'t
when my dad naggs me i hate him:)
>>especially when my dad nags me I hate it when he do that
now i have to study math
>>now I have to study my mathematics
so i will tell you more on the our class
>>subject so I will tell you more on our succeeding classes.
thank you bye bye~!
>>thank you goodbye.
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