hello teacher

2018-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello teacher It is first time that i write this composition I have short time to write this so i will just tell you about my family as you don't know my family i have mom,dad and my brother my dad is a photographer not a police officer my mom helps dad to make a great photo my brother is a student he is 14years old he goes to middle school i like my family but sometime i don't like them when my dad naggs me i hate him:) now i have to study math so i will tell you more on the our class thank you bye bye~!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thank you for Doing your assignment

and thank you for letting me know

some information\'s about your family
keep up  the Good Job ^^



Teacher Brian


Hello teacher

>>Hello teacher
It is first time that i write this composition

>>It is my first time to write a composition
I have short time to write this so i will just tell you about my family
>>I don\'t have much time to write this so I will just tell you about my family

as you don\'t know my family
 >>
as you don\'t know my family,

I have mom,dad and my brother
>>My family is composed of my Mother, Father and a brother,

my dad is a photographer not a police officer
 >>m
y father is a photographer and not a police officer

my mom helps dad to make a great photo
>>while my mother helps my father to make a great photo

my brother is a student he is 14years old he goes to middle school
>>and lastly my brother is a student he is 14years old and he goes to middle school

I like my family but sometime i don\'t like them
>>I love my family but sometimes I don\'t

when my dad naggs me i hate him:)
>>
especially when my dad nags me I hate it when he do that

now i have to study math
>>now I have to study my mathematics

so i will tell you more on the our class
>>subject so I will tell you more on our succeeding classes. 

thank you bye bye~!

>>thank you goodbye.

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