hello teacher( about my stress)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, teacher!
Teacher i have two problem
Do you want to hear about it?
first. These day, I am really tired and exhausted
I don't want to do anything, I just want to sleep
First i thought this is because i wake up early
But i don't think this is the reason
When i ask my parents about it they said it's because i don't have any target
It's mean if i have test tomorrow, i will study
So i am not gonna exhausted
I think that's the right answere
If i have target, I feel my way around achieving my goal
My second problem is my parents nags me alot
They nags me alot these day
I feel really stressful
They just don't nag they yell too
I don't want to hear anything
I know they nags for me
But i can do my self.
I think and behave
I hope my parents nags just little
Teacher help me:( Do you have any solution?
I will stop from here.
강사 첨삭
I have an advice for you.
But, it is better for us to talk about it during our class.
I want to talk with you about it.
So, just relax for now.
Just chill, don\'t stress yourself too much.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon, teacher!
>>Correct! Teacher i have two problem>>Teacher, I have two problems.
Do you want to hear about it?
>>Do you want to know about them? first. These day, I am really tired and exhausted >>First, I am really tired and exhausted these days.
I don\'t want to do anything, I just want to sleep
>>I don\'t want to do anything, I just want to sleep.First i thought this is because i wake up early
>>I thought it is because I woke up early today. But i don\'t think this is the reason
>>But, I don\'t think that it is the reason. When i ask my parents about it they said it\'s because i don\'t have any target
>>When I asked my parents about it, they told me that it is because I don\'t have any goals. It\'s mean if i have test tomorrow, i will study So i am not gonna exhausted
>>It means that I will have to study when I have incoming tests so, I will not get exhausted.
I think that\'s the right answere
>>So, I think that\'s the right answer. If i have target, I feel my way around achieving my goal
>>I feel that I am way around achieving my goals. My second problem is my parents nags me alot
>>My another problem is that my parents nag me a lot/ They nags me alot these day
>>They nag me a lot these days. I feel really stressful
>>I am get stressed about it. They just don\'t nag they yell too>>They just don\'t nag, they yell, too.
I don\'t want to hear anything
>>Correct! I know they nags for me
>>I know the reason why do those to me. But i can do my self.
>>But, I can handle myself. I think and behave
>>I think I need to behave well. I hope my parents nags just little
>>I hope that my parents won\'t me nag me a lot.Teacher help me:( Do you have any solution?
>>Teacher, help me. Do you have any advice? I will stop from here.
>>Correct!
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