hello teacher( about my stress)

2016-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good afternoon, teacher! Teacher i have two problem Do you want to hear about it? first. These day, I am really tired and exhausted I don't want to do anything, I just want to sleep First i thought this is because i wake up early But i don't think this is the reason When i ask my parents about it they said it's because i don't have any target It's mean if i have test tomorrow, i will study So i am not gonna exhausted I think that's the right answere If i have target, I feel my way around achieving my goal My second problem is my parents nags me alot They nags me alot these day I feel really stressful They just don't nag they yell too I don't want to hear anything I know they nags for me But i can do my self. I think and behave I hope my parents nags just little Teacher help me:( Do you have any solution? I will stop from here.

강사 첨삭

I have an advice for you. But, it is better for us to talk about it during our class. I want to talk with you about it. So, just relax for now. Just chill, don\'t stress yourself too much. Enjoy the rest of your day. ~Teacher Chloe   Good afternoon, teacher! >>Correct! Teacher i have two problem>>Teacher, I have two problems. Do you want to hear about it? >>Do you want to know about them? first. These day, I am really tired and exhausted >>First, I am really tired and exhausted these days. I don\'t want to do anything, I just want to sleep >>I don\'t want to do anything, I just want to sleep.First i thought this is because i wake up early >>I thought it is because I woke up early today. But i don\'t think this is the reason >>But, I don\'t think that it is the reason. When i ask my parents about it they said it\'s because i don\'t have any target >>When I asked my parents about it, they told me that it is because I don\'t have any goals. It\'s mean if i have test tomorrow, i will study So i am not gonna exhausted >>It means that I will have to study when I have incoming tests so, I will not get exhausted.  I think that\'s the right answere >>So, I think that\'s the right answer. If i have target, I feel my way around achieving my goal >>I feel that I am way around achieving my goals. My second problem is my parents nags me alot >>My another problem is that my parents nag me a lot/ They nags me alot these day >>They nag me a lot these days. I feel really stressful >>I am get stressed about it. They just don\'t nag they yell too>>They just don\'t nag, they yell, too. I don\'t want to hear anything >>Correct! I know they nags for me >>I know the reason why do those to me. But i can do my self. >>But, I can handle myself. I think and behave >>I think I need to behave well. I hope my parents nags just little >>I hope that my parents won\'t me nag me a lot.Teacher help me:( Do you have any solution? >>Teacher, help me. Do you have any advice? I will stop from here. >>Correct!

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