Hello teacher(about the baseball game)

2016-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good evening, teacher! Today after our class i came to this Homepage to watch my composition. But i was really shocked because my composition were all erased. I was curious about why it was erased and it still remains a mystery. Anyway about the baseball game It was really great. I love watching baseball game. My favorite team is KIA Actually I leave in gwang-ju so, I have to cheer KIA KIA is very great team They ranked 4th My favorite player is [이름] Ho Ryung He is great player His nickname is Little Tiger I thing it is very great nickname to him I will stop from here ~ PS .do you like baseball?

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Hello, my dear [이름]! Sadly, I don\'t watch baseball games. I even don\'t know how to play it. My sport is table tennis. I was a player when I was a student. By the way, I have observed that you always forget the period sign (.) every after your sentences. Always remember to put it, okay? You should always do it so, practice. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day. I will see you again our class. ~Teacher Chloe   Good evening, teacher! >>Correct! Today after our class i came to this Homepage to watch my composition. >>Today, I logged in to our homepage and checked my composition after our class. But i was really shocked because my composition were all erased. >>But, I was really shocked because my compositions are all erased.I was curious about why it was erased>>I was curious about on how it happened. and it still remains a mystery. >>It still remains a mystery. Anyway about the baseball game >>Anyway, I wached a baseball game. It was really great. >>Correct!I love watching baseball game. >>I love watching baseball games.My favorite team is KIA >>My favorite team is KIA.Actually I leave in gwang-ju so, I have to cheer KIA >>Actually I live in Gwang-ju so, I have to cheer for KIA.KIA is very great team >>KIA is a very great team. They ranked 4th >>They ranked 4th.My favorite player is [이름] Ho Ryung >>My favorite player is [이름] Ho Ryung.He is great player >>He is a great player. His nickname is Little Tiger >>His nickname is Little Tiger. I thing it is very great nickname to him >>I think it is a very great nickname for him. I will stop from here ~>>I will stop from here. PS .do you like baseball? >>Do you like baseball?

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