hello teacher camille

2017-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello teacher, camille~! Today we talked about college and how to survive in korea In our class i didn't able to tell you exactly Because i am not good at english. So, i will tell you about it now when we become 19years old , we have to take SAT (scholastic aptitude test) I heard it's very hard test. When we get a great score in SAT we can go to a great college also we can have a great job But if we fail on that test we can't get a great job I think it's very unfair Just one test control the people's life Anyway i will also tell you about middle school test In midterm test,we have to study 8 subject It's korean, math, science, history, society, english, chiness word, technology In final test we have to study 3more subject it's art, music, P.E We have to prepare for the test for 1~2month now i have to go see you in our class~!

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!

Thank you so much for doing a great job in doing your homework...

You always impress me and I commend you for a job well done.:)

Don\'t say that you are not good at English baby because definitely you are!

Keep up the faith in you my dear because I always believe that you can...

Take care always baby!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Hello teacher, camille~!

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Today we talked about college and how to survive in korea

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In our class i didn\'t able to tell you exactly 

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Because i am not good at english.

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So, i will tell you about it now

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when we become 19years old , we have to take SAT (scholastic aptitude test)

>>correct
I heard it\'s very hard test. 

>> I heard that it\'s a very difficult test.
When we get a great score in SAT we can go to a great college also we can have a great job

>>correct
But if we fail on that test we can\'t get a great job

>>correct
I think it\'s very unfair

>>correct
Just one test control the people\'s life

>>correct
Anyway i will also tell you about middle school test

>>correct
In midterm test,we have to study 8 subject

>>In midterm test, we have to study 8 subjects.
 It\'s korean, math, science, history, society, english, chiness word, technology

>>correct
In final test we have to study 3more subject it\'s art, music, P.E

>>correct
We have to prepare for the test for 1~2month

>>correct
-now i have to go see you in our class~!

>>correct


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