Hello Teacher :D
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Cheska,
Your corrections.^^
Have great weekend
Hello Teacher,
It's friday!! I love friday because I don't have any classes on fridays, so I
don't have to go to school!!!
>> It뭩 Friday and I love Fridays because I don뭪 have to go to school.
During last weekdays, I was very tired.
>>I was really tired over the weekdays.
To
go to school, I had to get up at 5am, and left home at 6am.
>>
To go to school, I have to wake at 5am and leave at 6am.
When
I came back home, It's almost 10:30pm.
>> correct
After I arrived at home, I ate late dinner and prepared our English class.
>> After I come back home, I eat dinner and then prepare for our class.
After finish our class, I took a shower and readyed to sleep.
>> After our class, I take a shower and then prepare for bed.
However these days I have too many homeworks, so I should do my homeworks after shower.
>> However I am loaded with homework these days that I cannot sleep
immediately after taking a shower.
Anyway
It was friday. I overslept until noon today!!! I forgot the hard time, I am
happy now :D:D:D
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