Hello teacher( good day)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, teacher!
Thank you for advicing for me.
I know my parents loves me but i don't like they nags me.
They nags me because they want me to be a better person.
I think i have to listen to them
When i said to my friends about it
but they said i am sick
They said i got a Jungibyeong(jung-i-byeong it is korean word)
It's mean when we became second grade in middle school
We got physical change so we fight with parents alot
I heard that in USA they called 8 grade Syndrom
It's not a popular word in USA
But all korean know this word
It's kind like internet word
I think i got that syndrom
I don't like this syndrom
I will stop from here
PS. I think i have to listen to my parents
I don't want to sick(haha)
강사 첨삭
Yes, you should listen to them.
You already know what is best for you.
So, obey them.
Always be a good daughter.
I know that you are.
So, just keep it up!
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon, teacher!
>>Correct!Thank you for advicing for me.
>>Thank you for advicing me.
OR:
>>Thank you for your advice. I know my parents loves me but i don\'t like they nags me.
>>I know that my parents love but I just don\'t like them nag me. They nags me because they want me to be a better person.
>>They nag me because they want me to be a better person.I think i have to listen to them
>>I think that I have to listen to them. When i said to my friends about it but they said i am sick
>>When I told my friends about it, they told me that I am sick. They said i got a Jungibyeong(jung-i-byeong it is korean word)
>>They said that I have \"jungibyeong\".It\'s mean when we became second grade in middle school We got physical change so we fight with parents alot
>>It means that when we are in adolecsence period, we change a lot physically, and we fight a log with our parents.I heard that in USA they called 8 grade Syndrom
>>I heard that it is called the 8th grade Syndrome in the USA. It\'s not a popular word in USA>>Although, it is not a popular word in the USA.
But all korean know this word
>>But, all Koreans know it. It\'s kind like internet word
>>It\'s like a millenial word. I think i got that syndrom
>>I think I have that syndome. I don\'t like this syndrom
>>I don\'t like it. I will stop from here
>>I will stop from here.PS. I think i have to listen to my parents
>>I think I have to listen to my parents. I don\'t want to sick(haha)
>>I don\'t want to be sick.
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