Hello teacher( good day)

2016-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good afternoon, teacher! Thank you for advicing for me. I know my parents loves me but i don't like they nags me. They nags me because they want me to be a better person. I think i have to listen to them When i said to my friends about it but they said i am sick They said i got a Jungibyeong(jung-i-byeong it is korean word) It's mean when we became second grade in middle school We got physical change so we fight with parents alot I heard that in USA they called 8 grade Syndrom It's not a popular word in USA But all korean know this word It's kind like internet word I think i got that syndrom I don't like this syndrom I will stop from here PS. I think i have to listen to my parents I don't want to sick(haha)

강사 첨삭

Yes, you should listen to them. You already know what is best for you. So, obey them. Always be a good daughter. I know that you are. So, just keep it up! ~Teacher Chloe Good afternoon, teacher! >>Correct!Thank you for advicing for me. >>Thank you for advicing me. OR: >>Thank you for your advice. I know my parents loves me but i don\'t like they nags me. >>I know that my parents love but I just don\'t like them nag me. They nags me because they want me to be a better person. >>They nag me because they want me to be a better person.I think i have to listen to them >>I think that I have to listen to them. When i said to my friends about it but they said i am sick >>When I told my friends about it, they told me that I am sick. They said i got a Jungibyeong(jung-i-byeong it is korean word) >>They said that I have \"jungibyeong\".It\'s mean when we became second grade in middle school We got physical change so we fight with parents alot >>It means that when we are in adolecsence period, we change a lot physically, and we fight a log with our parents.I heard that in USA they called 8 grade Syndrom >>I heard that it is called the 8th grade Syndrome in the USA. It\'s not a popular word in USA>>Although, it is not a popular word in the USA. But all korean know this word >>But, all Koreans know it. It\'s kind like internet word >>It\'s like a millenial word. I think i got that syndrom >>I think I have that syndome. I don\'t like this syndrom >>I don\'t like it. I will stop from here >>I will stop from here.PS. I think i have to listen to my parents >>I think I have to listen to my parents. I don\'t want to sick(haha) >>I don\'t want to be sick.

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