Hello teacher , I added a sentence in yesterday project. I don\'t know if it\'s a natural sentence
학생이 쓴 원문
Zonked means like very tired and exhausted.
Hi I\\\\\\\'m Aurora. Do you know the sleeping princess? so I do believe that you know the sleeping princess.
Today, I went for a walk for 5 hours and now I feel zonked.
Do you feel zonked sometimes? I do, I sometimes feel tired.
Now,I feel tired. I can\\\\\\\'t talk anymore.
I\\\\\\\'m going to bed now. Bye!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
We already corrected your sentences in our last class but here is my corrections again for your homework.^^
-->T.Christina
Hi I\\\\\\\'m Aurora. Do you know the sleeping princess?
>> Hi! I\'m Aurora. Do you know the sleeping princess?
so I do believe that you know the sleeping princess.
>> I do believe that you know the sleeping princess.
Today, I went for a walk for 5 hours and now I feel zonked.
>> CORRECT!
Do you feel zonked sometimes? I do, I sometimes feel tired.
>> Do you feel zonked sometimes? Well I do, I sometimes feel tired.
Now,I feel tired. I can\\\\\\\'t talk anymore.
Do you feel zonked sometimes? I do, I sometimes feel tired.
>> Do you feel zonked sometimes? Well I do, I sometimes feel tired.
Now,I feel tired. I can\\\\\\\'t talk anymore.
>> Now, I\'m fee[이름]g tired. I can\'t talk anymore.
I\\\\\\\'m going to bed now. Bye!
I\\\\\\\'m going to bed now. Bye!
>> I\'m going to bed now. Bye!
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