hello teacher( i am really tired today)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, teacher!
Today, I was really tired
I want to sleep but, I can't
I am really busy to study
I don't know why we have to study
I heard in USA, or Denmark didn't have to study alot
When they got second grade they just start to study plus and minus
In Korea we learned really hard thing
like probability of some situation
find the same angle of the shape
It's really hard to study
Why Korea especially obsession on the study?
I watched a video that Korea study doesn't help us
we just reapeat same things
When i grow up i will teach our child real study
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
1.c
2.b
3.A
4.c
5.b
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Education is the key to success.
So, you should study hard.
Oh, I want you to study more about articles.
Also, I want you to study our homework.
Anyway, have a good night!
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon, teacher!
>>Correct! Today, I was really tired
>>Today, I am really tired.
OR:>>I am really tired today. I want to sleep but, I can\'t
>>I want to sleep but, I cant. I am really busy to study
>>I am realy busy to study. I don\'t know why we have to study
>>I don\'t know why we have to study. I heard in USA, or Denmark didn\'t have to study alot>>I heard that studying is a lot is unimportant in the USA and Denmark.
When they got second grade they just start to study plus and minus
>>When students get to second grade, they start to study addition and subtraction. In Korea we learned really hard thing
>>In South Korea, we really study hard things. like probability of some situation
>>Like the probability of some equations. find the same angle of the shape
>>Also, we study about shapes and angles. It\'s really hard to study
>>Correct!Why Korea especially obsession on the study?>>Why South Korea is obssessed in studying?
I watched a video that Korea study doesn\'t help us
>>I watched a video saying that Korea\'s study habit doesn\'t help us.we just reapeat same things
>>We just repeat the same things. When i grow up i will teach our child real study>>When I grow up, I will teach my children the real meaning of studying.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY1.c
>>b2.b
>>c3.A
>>b4.c
>>b5.b
>>c
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