Hello Teacher~ I hand in my homework
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.
Do you have a business? Do you like to have a business in the future?
I actually have a business and before I started it, the first thing that I considered
is money or the capital. I did some research on how to start it.
It was not that really difficult for me because I already have that experience.
See you later [이름]. And good morning! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
Above all things, I should have a confidence.
>> First of all, I should have a confidence.
Of course, you would know about its importance very well.
>> You should also know its importance as well.
Second, there needs the idea.
>> Secondly, you need to have a good idea.
The idea should have possibility and profitability and the future prosfect of the business.
>> You need to consider if your plan is profitable and prospective for your future business.
Third, There needs the survey how to start the business.
>> Thirdly, you can also have a survey about how to start a business.
Finally, I should plan from the start of the business to the management of that.
>> And lastly, I should learn how to start and manage a business.
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