Hello Teacher~ I hand in my homework

2018-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What are some things that you need to consider when starting your own business? Above all things, I should have a confidence. Of course, you would know about its importance very well. Second, there needs the idea. The idea should have possibility and profitability and the future prosfect of the business. Third, There needs the survey how to start the business. Finally, I should plan from the start of the business to the management of that. Dear. Teacher See you next day.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.

Do you have a business? Do you like to have a business in the future?

I actually have a business and before I started it, the first thing that I considered

is money or the capital. I did some research on how to start it.

It was not that really difficult for me because I already have that experience.

See you later [이름]. And good morning! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Above all things, I should have a confidence.

>> First of all, I should have a confidence.
Of course, you would know about its importance very well.

>> You should also know its importance as well.
Second, there needs the idea.

>> Secondly, you need to have a good idea.
The idea should have possibility and profitability and the future prosfect of the business.

>> You need to consider if your plan is profitable and prospective for your future business.
Third, There needs the survey how to start the business.

>> Thirdly, you can also have a survey about how to start a business.
Finally, I should plan from the start of the business to the management of that.

>> And lastly, I should learn how to start and manage a business.

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