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Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework.

I like your answers. I think that you always have that good heart

not only for yourself but also to other people.

We have a typhoon here. So everyone is preparing again.

~~May~~

I think that that is conrrect or not correct.

>> There are advantages and disadvantages.

OR >> There are good things and bad things.
 I could call the below words th mind as soon as I see the problem.

>> I consider the words below as a problem sometimes.
 First of all, It is faith.

>> CORRECT

OR >> The first one is faith. / First is faith.
 If have not faith, you will not believe another person as well as yourself.

>>  If don\'t have a faith in life, you will not believe other people as well as yourself.
 Secondly, the important issue is love.

>> The second important issue is love.
 You have to love yourself and another person as well.

>> You have to love yourself and other people as well.
 Finally, a positive mind will give you a gift that you can live a happier life.

>> CORRECT

OR >> And finally, a positive mind will help you to live a happier life.
 But I did rethink of everything.

>> CORRECT

OR >> But I try to consider some things.
 There must have the possibility that you can avoiding poverty.

>> There should be some ways to avoid poverty.
 In other words, i think that the possibility is very important.

>> And these ways are  also very important.