hello teacher( i hope you feel better soon)

2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good afternoon, teacher~ In our class, I told you about my school story. You know we got punishment from our teacher. When we had a Korean class we talked so much. Unfortunately, my class teacher saw that we kept talking. She said she was really disappointed to us. She also said " go home and think about what punishment we want to get" You said we have to clean the class room. I think it's wonderful idea . My class room is really dirty. I will tell my teacher about it. Also you said you catch a cold. I want to advice you something. In every winter, I catch a cold. So, I know what to do. First, drink a lot of water. Next, go to sleep early or get some rest. I hope you feel better soon. I will stop from here~ PS. by the way i will show my friends tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I really appreciate your advice. That would help me. Thank you very much. Don\'t worry, I will follow your advice my little sister. Yes, you should clean your room then. Good luck! ~Teacher Chloe Good afternoon, teacher~ >>Good afternoon, teacher.In our class, I told you about my school story. >>In our class, I told you about my time at school.You know we got punishment from our teacher. >>You know that we got a punishment from our teacher.When we had a Korean class we talked so much. >>We talked too much during our Korean class. Unfortunately, my class teacher saw that we kept talking. >>Unfortunately, our teacher saw us kept on talking. She said she was really disappointed to us. >>She said that she was really disappointed in us.She also said \" go home and think about what punishment we want to get\" >>She advised us to go home and think of a punishment we deserve. You said we have to clean the class room. >>You said that we can clean our classroom. I think it\'s wonderful idea . >>I think it\'s a wonderful idea.My class room is really dirty. >>My classroom is really dirty.I will tell my teacher about it. >>Correct! Also you said you catch a cold. >>Also, you said that you caught a cold. I want to advice you something. >>I want to give you an advice. In every winter, I catch a cold. >>I catch a cold every winter. So, I know what to do. >>Correct!First, drink a lot of water. >>Correct! Next, go to sleep early or get some rest. >>Then you should sleep early and get some rest. I hope you feel better soon. >>I hope you will feel better soon. I will stop from here~ >>I will stop from here. PS. by the way i will show my friends tomorrow. >>By the way, I will show the pictures of my friends tomorrow.

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