hello teacher( i hope you feel better soon)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon, teacher~
In our class, I told you about my school story.
You know we got punishment from our teacher.
When we had a Korean class we talked so much.
Unfortunately, my class teacher saw that we kept talking.
She said she was really disappointed to us.
She also said " go home and think about what punishment we want to get"
You said we have to clean the class room.
I think it's wonderful idea .
My class room is really dirty.
I will tell my teacher about it.
Also you said you catch a cold.
I want to advice you something.
In every winter, I catch a cold.
So, I know what to do.
First, drink a lot of water.
Next, go to sleep early or get some rest.
I hope you feel better soon.
I will stop from here~
PS. by the way i will show my friends tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I really appreciate your advice.
That would help me.
Thank you very much.
Don\'t worry, I will follow your advice my little sister.
Yes, you should clean your room then.
Good luck!
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon, teacher~
>>Good afternoon, teacher.In our class, I told you about my school story.
>>In our class, I told you about my time at school.You know we got punishment from our teacher.
>>You know that we got a punishment from our teacher.When we had a Korean class we talked so much.
>>We talked too much during our Korean class. Unfortunately, my class teacher saw that we kept talking.
>>Unfortunately, our teacher saw us kept on talking.
She said she was really disappointed to us.
>>She said that she was really disappointed in us.She also said \" go home and think about what punishment we want to get\"
>>She advised us to go home and think of a punishment we deserve. You said we have to clean the class room.
>>You said that we can clean our classroom. I think it\'s wonderful idea .
>>I think it\'s a wonderful idea.My class room is really dirty.
>>My classroom is really dirty.I will tell my teacher about it.
>>Correct! Also you said you catch a cold.
>>Also, you said that you caught a cold. I want to advice you something.
>>I want to give you an advice. In every winter, I catch a cold.
>>I catch a cold every winter. So, I know what to do.
>>Correct!First, drink a lot of water.
>>Correct! Next, go to sleep early or get some rest.
>>Then you should sleep early and get some rest. I hope you feel better soon.
>>I hope you will feel better soon. I will stop from here~
>>I will stop from here. PS. by the way i will show my friends tomorrow.
>>By the way, I will show the pictures of my friends tomorrow.
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