hello teacher~ (i was sick)

2016-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Good evening, teacher! Today, I dumped in to the ground It was really hurt I was playing with my friend right after the class It was really hot day so , we just hanging out together I was leaned on her back But, we had one problem my friend stood her body Then my body was falling to the ground first i dumped my head also sound was really big all the friends in our class looked at me I was really sick I went to the school infirmary she said she don't know what to do because she can't look inside of my head she also said when you feel strange please just go to the hospital I didn't felt strange so, i just came back to home and told about what happened today My parents was so worried about it They said get some rest Now i have little headache I am so worry about it:( ps.I am really emjoying to talk with you so much~

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I thought you are already asleep because you have a headache. I am worried about you, too. But, don\'t worry that much, okay? When you feel something, tell your parents about it. Take a rest for now and ready again for tomorrow. Have a tight sleep my dear. Good night and sweet dreams! ~Teacher Chloe Good evening, teacher! >>Correct!Today, I dumped in to the ground >>Today, I fell into the ground. It was really hurt >>It really hurt me very much. I was playing with my friend right after the class >>I played with my friend right after our class. It was really hot day so , we just hanging out together>>Today, it was really so hot so we just hung out together. I was leaned on her back >>I leaned on her back. But, we had one problem >>But, we had a problem. my friend stood her body Then my body was falling to the ground >>When my friend stood up, I fell into the ground. first i dumped my head also sound was really big >>I my head bumped to the floor and made a loud sound. all the friends in our class looked at me >>All my friends in our class looked at me. I was really sick >>I was really hurt. I went to the school infirmary>>I went to our school clinic. she said she don\'t know what to do because she can\'t look inside of my head >>But, the nurse told me that she doesn\'t know what to do because she can\'t look inside my head.she also said when you feel strange please just go to the hospital >>She also advised me to go to the hospital when I feel strange. I didn\'t felt strange so, i just came back to home >>I didn\'t feel strange so, I just came back home. and told about what happened today >>I told my parents about it. My parents was so worried about it >>So, they were worried about me. They said get some rest >>They advised me to get some rest. Now i have little headache >>I am still having a little headache. I am so worry about it:( >>I am also worried about it. ps.I am really emjoying to talk with you so much~ >>Anyway, I really enjoy talking with you very much.

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