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2013-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

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good evening! (actually I wrote it in dawn.) this week i deterimine I won't go home. because of time efficiency. when i go home, i always do nothing but watching movies. so i stayed dormitory. and now im studing! wow~!!! so amazing Staying gives me many things. lesuire time, cleaning time sleeping time... but among these things, the best thing is ... homework time~~~~ yeah~~!!! i'm happy because of the truth that next day is sunday! wowowowowowowowowow!! 1.Daddy, are we almost _there__ yet? 2.The _our__ of reckoning has come. 3.You had better do it _right__ away. 4.A female sheep is called a _yew__. 5.My bicycle tire has a slow _leak__. 6.Queen Elizabeth II __reign_ England. 7.I would __not_ like to go with you. 8.There are seven days in one __week_. 9.Tolstoy was a __great_ Russian writer. 10.He had his _eye__ on a tweed jacket.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!! Good morning!!

I hope you started the day right.

How was your weekend? Did you enjoy it?

Thank you for answering and sending your assignment.

You did a great job.

You really are studying hard.

You committed only a single error.

Please review it during your free time.

I will see you in class.

Take care.

_T. Nina_

good evening! (actually I wrote it in dawn.)\\

>>Good evening! (actually, I made this homework at dawn)
this week i deterimine I won\'t go home.
because of time efficiency.

>>This week, I am determined not to go home because the time is not enough.
when i go home, i always do nothing but watching movies.

>>Every time I go home, I usually just watch movies.
so i stayed dormitory. and now im studing!

>>So I decided to stay in the dorm to study.
wow~!!! so amazing

>>Wow! That is amazing.
Staying gives me many things. lesuire time, cleaning time
sleeping time... but among these things, the best thing is ...

>>Staying gives me a lot of leisure time like cleaning and sleeping but the most important thing and the best thing is doing my homework.
homework time~~~~ yeah~~!!! i\'m happy because of the truth that next day is sunday.
wowowowowowowowowow!!

>>I am happy because tomorrow is Sunday.^^kkk... [I like your WOW!]^^
1.Daddy, are we almost _there__ yet?
>>CORRECT!!
2.The _our__ of reckoning has come.
>>The hour of reckoning has come.
3.You had better do it _right__ away.
>>CORRECT!!
4.A female sheep is called a _yew__.
>>A female sheep is called an ewe.
5.My bicycle tire has a slow _leak__.
>>CORRECT!!
6.Queen Elizabeth II __reign_ England.
>>CORRECT!!
7.I would __not_ like to go with you.
>>CORRECT!!
8.There are seven days in one __week_.
>>CORRECT!!
9.Tolstoy was a __great_ Russian writer.
>>CORRECT!!
10.He had his _eye__ on a tweed jacket.

>>CORRECT!!

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