hello teacher~(more about jesa)

2016-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good evening, teacher~! Today I told you about Jesa Because tomorrow , we have my great grandmother jesa But I can’t tell you enough because I don’t know how to tell you about it So I will tell you now Jesa(ancestral rites) It’s a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone’s passing We prepare delicious food like rice cake, jeon (it’s like vegetable pancake), jabjae (it’s kind of noodle), fish , fruit etc.. It’s kind of traditional in korea We think that soul come in to the house and eat the food that we serve. I think that’s impossible but like I said in our class My friend saw the fog and go around on the table It’s kind of scary but it’s also mystery I want to know that ghost is real? Maybe I will stop here PS. do you like scary movie? I watched scary movie for 2time in my life I hate scary movie...

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Hi, my darling [이름]!   Thank you for explaining about Jesa further. I appreciate your effort. ^^ Well, for your question...I hate scary movies! I\'m a coward. When I watch a scary movie, I feel like my hearbeat will stop. kkk It\'s funny, but it\'s true. We both hate scary movies. ^^   _Teacher Dianne   Good evening, teacher~! >> CorrectToday I told you about Jesa >> Today, I told you about Jesa.Because tomorrow , we have my great grandmother jesa. >> I told you about it because tomorrow we will have Jesa for my great grandmother. >> Or: I told you about it because tomorrow we will have an offering ceremony for my great grandmother.But I can’t tell you enough because I don’t know how to tell you about it. >> CorrectSo I will tell you now. >> CorrectJesa (ancestral rites) It’s a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone’s passing >> Jesa is an ancestral rite or a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone’s passing.We prepare delicious food like rice cake, jeon (it’s like vegetable pancake), jabjae (it’s kind of noodle), fish , fruit etc.. >> We prepare delicious foods like rice cake, jeon which is like vegetable pancake, jabjae which is a kind of noodle, fish, fruits, etc..It’s kind of traditional in korea >> It is a tradition in Korea.We think that soul come in to the house and eat the food that we serve. >> We think that the soul will come to the house and will eat the food that we serve or offer.I think that’s impossible but like I said in our class >> I think that’s impossible like what I\'ve said in our class.My friend saw the fog and go around on the table >>My friend saw the fog and it moved around the table.It’s kind of scary but it’s also mystery >> It is scary and a mystery at the same time.I want to know that ghost is real? >> I want to know if that ghost is real.Maybe I will stop here >> Maybe I will stop here.PS. do you like scary movie? I watched scary movie for 2time in my life I hate scary movie... >> PS. Do you like scary movies? I only watched two scary movies twice in my life because I hate watching scary movies.

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