hello teacher~(more about jesa)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening, teacher~!
Today I told you about Jesa
Because tomorrow , we have my great grandmother jesa
But I can’t tell you enough because I don’t know how to tell you about it
So I will tell you now
Jesa(ancestral rites) It’s a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone’s passing
We prepare delicious food like rice cake, jeon (it’s like vegetable pancake), jabjae (it’s kind of noodle), fish , fruit etc..
It’s kind of traditional in korea
We think that soul come in to the house and eat the food that we serve.
I think that’s impossible but like I said in our class
My friend saw the fog and go around on the table
It’s kind of scary but it’s also mystery
I want to know that ghost is real?
Maybe I will stop here
PS. do you like scary movie? I watched scary movie for 2time in my life I hate scary movie...
강사 첨삭
Hi, my darling [이름]!
Thank you for explaining about Jesa further.
I appreciate your effort. ^^
Well, for your question...I hate scary movies!
I\'m a coward. When I watch a scary movie, I feel like my hearbeat will stop. kkk
It\'s funny, but it\'s true.
We both hate scary movies. ^^
_Teacher Dianne
Good evening, teacher~!
>> CorrectToday I told you about Jesa
>> Today, I told you about Jesa.Because tomorrow , we have my great grandmother jesa.
>> I told you about it because tomorrow we will have Jesa for my great grandmother.
>> Or: I told you about it because tomorrow we will have an offering ceremony for my great grandmother.But I can’t tell you enough because I don’t know how to tell you about it.
>> CorrectSo I will tell you now.
>> CorrectJesa (ancestral rites) It’s a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone’s passing
>> Jesa is an ancestral rite or a ceremony held every year to mark the day of someone’s passing.We prepare delicious food like rice cake, jeon (it’s like vegetable pancake), jabjae (it’s kind of noodle), fish , fruit etc..
>> We prepare delicious foods like rice cake, jeon which is like vegetable pancake, jabjae which is a kind of noodle, fish, fruits, etc..It’s kind of traditional in korea
>> It is a tradition in Korea.We think that soul come in to the house and eat the food that we serve.
>> We think that the soul will come to the house and will eat the food that we serve or offer.I think that’s impossible but like I said in our class
>> I think that’s impossible like what I\'ve said in our class.My friend saw the fog and go around on the table
>>My friend saw the fog and it moved around the table.It’s kind of scary but it’s also mystery
>> It is scary and a mystery at the same time.I want to know that ghost is real?
>> I want to know if that ghost is real.Maybe I will stop here
>> Maybe I will stop here.PS. do you like scary movie? I watched scary movie for 2time in my life I hate scary movie...
>> PS. Do you like scary movies? I only watched two scary movies twice in my life because I hate watching scary movies.
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