hello teacher(my day)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon,teacher!
Today,in korea every 2grade in middle school student had a test
It was english listening test
Every semester we have this test
I didn't worried about this test
Like i thoght it was really easy for me
Everyday i watch english movie, drama also i study with POWER ENGLISH
The test started on 11o'clock
It was really fun
They said really slow.
When test was over, we talked about our test
They said it was really hard.
I was really proud of my self, i thought everyone think like me
But it was not
I will study english more harder.
Oh my score was 100!!
I was so happy
Anyway chuseok is coming
We only have six days left before our holiday.
Hooray! I am so exciting now
I will get alot of money
You said your going back to your home i am really happy to hear that
We will be so much fun
I will stop from here~ love you
Home work for today!
1.a
2.an
3.a
4.a
5.an
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
So, we are both excited for the holiday.
You are right.
It would be so much fun!
Anyway, please check my corrections for you.
Also, review our homework.
Enjoy the rest of your evening.
~Teacher Chloe
Good afternoon,teacher!
>>Good afternoon, teacher!Today,in korea every 2grade in middle school student had a test
>>Today, all second grade middle school students had a test today. It was english listening test
>>They had English listening test. Every semester we have this test
>>We have the test every semester. I didn\'t worried about this test
>>I didn\'t worry about the test. Like i thoght it was really easy for me>>It was really easy for me.
Everyday i watch english movie, drama also i study with POWER ENGLISH
>>Everyday, I watch English movie dramas and I study English with you. The test started on 11o\'clock
>>The test started at 11 o\'clock. It was really fun
>>It was really fun. They said really slow.
>>We waited long for it. When test was over, we talked about our test>>When the test was finished, we talked about it.
They said it was really hard.
>>Correct! I was really proud of my self, i thought everyone think like me But it was not>>I thought it was easy for them, too. I was really proud of myself. I will study english more harder.
>>I will study English harder. Oh my score was 100!!
>>My score was 100. I was so happy>>Correct!
Anyway chuseok is coming>>Anyway, Chuseok is coming.
We only have six days left before our holiday. >>Correct!
Hooray!
>>Correct!
I am so exciting now
>>I am so excited now. I will get alot of money
>>I will receive a lot of money. You said your going back to your home i am really happy to hear that>>I was really happy to hear from you that you will go home on the holiday.
We will be so much fun
>>We will have so much fun. I will stop from here~ love you>>I will stop from here. I love you. Home work for today!
>>This is my homework for today. 1.a
>>Correct! 2.an
>>Correct! 3.a
>>an4.a
>>Correct! 5.an
>>Correct!
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