Hello Teacher~ Please check my homework

2018-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I would like to talk about my last story that i had forgotten. When I became middle school student, My family lived with a cat. If I feed the cat, he loved so much. Especially he liked to play with a ball. He also caught a rat very well. Sometimes he always followed me wherever i go. I miss then. Hello Teacher~ Today my homework also is late. I'm so sorry. I always spend with my family both saturday and sunday. Because I have time for studying from Monday to Friday. Now my children are sleeping. And I told you my military service story is complicated. I had postponed three times to join the military. That's the reason why I could not get into a university. I did postpone three times for getting into there. And one of the words I told you last Friday is not sure. The age I left the army was 28 years old. Have a nice night! Good bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing the story. I also used to have a cat before, but now I only have a pet dog. ^^

Cat is a \"noun\". When you talk about animals, use \"it\" but it depends on how you recognize the animal.

Some people still \"he\" or \"she\".

Anyway, you really finished your military late at the age of 28. But that\'s okay. If it was complicated, I hope

you still learned something from your experiences in the past. See you later!^^

~~Teacher May~~

I would like to talk about my last story that i had forgotten.

>> I would like to share you a story that I had almost forgotten.
When I became middle school student, My family lived with a cat.

>> Correct

OR >> When I was in middle school, I used to raise a cat.
If I feed the cat, he loved so much.

>> My cat loved me whenever I fed it.
Especially he liked to play with a ball.

>> It also liked to play with a ball.
 He also caught a rat very well.

>> It was also very good at catching rats.
Sometimes he always followed me wherever i go.

>> Sometimes it always followed me wherever I went.
I miss then.

>> I miss my cat.

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