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2018-09-14 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What was the happiest time in your entire life? There is so much in my entire life. If I should select one of my life. I'd like to tell you that I met my wife. But honestly I didn't give her a wonderful proposal. So I'm so sorry her. The year 2020 is our 10th anniversary. I'd like to plan to give her a wonderful gift. Dear. teacher Have a nice day! See you~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! You have a very good answer in this question. I was very happy too when I met my husband.

Actually, my husband and I were friends since we were young but we didn\'t go dating. We had our

girlfriend and boyfriend before but we were friends. We broke up with them then we started dating for a year then got married.

We got married just last year. ^^

~~May~~

There is so much in my entire life.

>> There are lots of things that happened in my life.
If I should select one of my life.
I\'d like to tell you that I met my wife.

>> One of my happiest experiences was when I met my wife.
But honestly I didn\'t give her a wonderful proposal.

>> CORRECT
So I\'m so sorry her.

>> So, I apologized to her.
The year 2020 is our 10th anniversary.

>> CORRECT

OR >> We will celebrate our 10th wedding anniversary in 2020.
 I\'d like to plan to give her a wonderful gift.

>> I\'m planning to give her a wonderful gift.

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