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~~May~~

I never know that means before I was investigating.

>> I didn\'t know about it until I searched for its meaning.
We should holding a memorial ceremony for our ancestors.

>> We hold memorial ceremonies for our ancestors.
We also have the food that we made together.

>> We also make foods.
If we have a close relative, they also will come together.

>> Our family and relatives gather together.

The things I am thankful for

>> I am thankful for all the things I have.
We should be thankful for near us.
For example, it\'s the family and friends and so on

>> We should thank all the people around us like our family and friends.
But We should be thankful for much more what we can\'t see.
It\'s oxygen and water.

>> We should also thank all the things that we have and need like the air and the water.