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Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your story. I believe that everyone deserves to reach their goals in life.

Nothing is impossible if you really work hard and if you are determined to work for your goals.

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~~May~~

1.I’m studying English after resigning a company which has worked
for four days.

>> I started to study English after I resigned from a company where I worked for only 4 days.
I really realized that English skill is very important in office life.

>> It was because I realized that English is a very important skill to possess at work.
Although I was late, I have been studying English.

>> Although I studied late, I still like to learn.
The company I resigned is manufacturing in-panel switches and units
which operate the function of the automobile.

>> The company I worked with manufactures in-panel switches and units which are used to operate the functions of an automobile.
I did work the quality and the development control on the new vehicle.

>> My job was under the quality and development control of a new vehicle.
I mainly worked the control of the development plan and
HMC PSO approval task and ISIR approval task.

>> That was my role in the company and also, I did the approval for HMC PSO and ISIR.
The company I have worked before gave me a lot of things which be
associated with the knowledge of automobile component as well as
that of the automobile company.

>> I have learned a lot from that company especially anything about automobile.
 Although I have the lack of English skill a little, I can improve
that through medium and learning English by phone.

>> Although I don\'t have enough English skills, I believe that I can improve that through online English study.
2. I did know that the Bose Corporation is one of the big companies
which make good speakers.

>> I knew that Bose Corporation is one of the big companies that produce good speakers.
3.My strengths are very cooperative and meticulous.
MY weakness point is a little stubborn

>> I consider being very cooperative and meticulous as my strengths and my weakness is that I am little stubborn.