Hello teacher..Please check my homework

2018-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I think it can help me a lot. If whoever can do a simple gesture like body language using their body and hands and eyes and so on, they can express their mind. Particulaly, I also did use it when I did go to a business trip five years ago. It has the important role to help the communication of all the people as well as me. Hi~ My teacher~ See ya~

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Hi [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort in answering questions.

However, I simplified your sentences. I understood your sentences but I just wrote here

the simplest way to say them. I hope it helps. See you later! ^^

~~May~~

I think it can help me a lot.

>> CORRECT
If whoever can do a simple gesture like body language using their body and hands and eyes and so on, they can express their mind.

>> Everyone can express their feelings using a body language.
Particulaly, I also did use it when I did go to a business trip five years ago.

>> I used a body language when I had a business trip 5 years ago.
It has the important role to help the communication of all the people as well as me.

>> It useful and important in communicating to the people.

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