Hello teacher..Please check my homework

2018-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I usually practice to make use of Youtube and English phone calls. I write the important expressions on my note after I finish the class. I do write it listening to the Feedback which you sent me. And then I loudly tell the expressions. This is the way that uses the phone calls and the way to use Youtube is... I have to select a good movie or a good animation that I study easy. Now I have been studying using the Rapunzel. But its important point is a repeat. I repeatly do listen to and tell the expressions in the animation. When I repeatly do it, I perfectly will have the expressions. Hello~ My teacher~ I saw this question 2month ago. I felt so good when I wrote my answer on your question. I never saw the dictionary this time. I felt that I have been developing more and more. Thank for your teaching~ My teacher. See you next day, Have a great day.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! How are you? Yes. I know that I already gave you the same question before.

I did it in purpose because I wanted to know if you ever have any new strategies to learn English

and I wanted to see your progress based on your answers. I think there\'s already an improvement in your skills.

Keep learning! See you later. ^^

~~May~~

 I usually practice to make use of Youtube and English phone calls.

>> I usually practice my English on Youtube and through English phone calls.
 I write the important expressions on my note after I finish the class.

>> CORRECT
 I do write it listening to the Feedback which you sent me.

 And then I loudly tell the expressions.

>> I write the feedbacks you sent me and I read the expressions loudly.
 This is the way that uses the phone calls and the way to use Youtube is...

>> This is how I practice through the Youtube and phone calls.
 I have to select a good movie or a good animation that I study easy.

>> I have to select a good movie or a good animation that I can easily study.
 Now I have been studying using the Rapunzel.

>> Now I am studying by watching the Rapunzel movie.

But its important point is a repeat.

>> One important thing to do is to repeat.
 I repeatly do listen to and tell the expressions in the animation.

>> I listen and say the expressions repeatedly from the animation.
 When I repeatly do it, I perfectly will have the expressions.

>> Whenever I do it, I can easily memorize the expressions.

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