Hello teacher..Please check my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning [이름]! How are you? Yes. I know that I already gave you the same question before.
I did it in purpose because I wanted to know if you ever have any new strategies to learn English
and I wanted to see your progress based on your answers. I think there\'s already an improvement in your skills.
Keep learning! See you later. ^^
~~May~~
I usually practice to make use of Youtube and English phone calls.
>> I usually practice my English on Youtube and through English phone calls.
I write the important expressions on my note after I finish the class.
>> CORRECT
I do write it listening to the Feedback which you sent me.
And then I loudly tell the expressions.
>> I write the feedbacks you sent me and I read the expressions loudly.
This is the way that uses the phone calls and the way to use Youtube is...
>> This is how I practice through the Youtube and phone calls.
I have to select a good movie or a good animation that I study easy.
>> I have to select a good movie or a good animation that I can easily study.
Now I have been studying using the Rapunzel.
>> Now I am studying by watching the Rapunzel movie.
But its important point is a repeat.
>> One important thing to do is to repeat.
I repeatly do listen to and tell the expressions in the animation.
>> I listen and say the expressions repeatedly from the animation.
When I repeatly do it, I perfectly will have the expressions.
>> Whenever I do it, I can easily memorize the expressions.
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