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학생이 쓴 원문
What are some ways you feel you can make a difference in this world?
--> I think there is no need to change this world.
Because I also like this world.
We\'re living very well because of conveniences deveoping so fast near us.
Hello~ My teacher~
The above is my personel opinion.^^;;;
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for your answer. Some people live a good life and some people don\'t.
Some countries are very safe to live in and some countries are dangerous.
We all have our own opinions, and I always respect that. See you later! ^^
~~May~~
I think there is no need to change this world.
Because I also like this world.
>> I think we don\'t need to change because I love our world.
We\'re living very well because of conveniences deveoping so fast near us.
>> We\'re living in a convenient world because everything develops fast like technologies.
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