Hello teacher..Please check my homework

2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What is the most peaceful place you know of? ==> There are a lot of place near me. For example, the library I had gone before and a mountain and a park... But the place I think of is my room in the house. There is the place to give the feeling of relaxation to me. Hello~ teacher~ How are you today? Here is it\'s raining too much. I don\'t know because of the weather but I feel gloomy now. Anyway... See you tomorrow. Have a great day for you. Bye~

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I am good. How about you? I hope that you\'re always doing fine.

Take care and keep yourself and your family safe even if it\'s raining. ^^

~~May~~

There are a lot of place near me.

For example, the library I had gone
before and a mountain and a park...

>> There are a lot of places near me like the library, mountain, and park.
But the place I think of is my room in the
house.

>> But the place that is peaceful for me is my room.
There is the place to give the feeling of
relaxation to me.

>> It is the place that makes me relaxed.

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