hello teacher~(so so day)
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy friday, teacher!
Today, I was really hungry
In school class my tummy was really grumbling
So, I was little embarrassed
During the 4hour, i didn't ate anything
I was really hungry
Actully, everyday i got hungry so, i run in to our school store
(there are alot to eat like ice cream, hamburger )
But today i don't have any money so i didn't eat anything
Before the school lunch time
I got so excited.
Today's menu was bulgogui, [이름]chi, rice, salad, doenjang stew
It was really delicious
Actully my school it's popular for great lunch
I think i like my school
the lunch is delicious also great friend
It's hard to wake up in the morning
But it's great to see my friends
Also i will tell you about my friends
I have alot of friends but in our class i have 4 friends
They are nice
We don't lie to each other
I think i like my friends
I will stop from here! see you in the class
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Eat whenever you feel hungry.
Always feed your hungry stomach.
Good to know that you were able to eat delicious food during lunch.
I believe that you felt better after.
Anyway, have a fabulous weekend!
~Teacher Chloe
Happy friday, teacher!
>>Happy Friday, teacher!Today, I was really hungry
>>I am really hungry right now. In school class my tummy was really grumbling
>>My tummy was really grumbling during our class. So, I was little embarrassed
>>So, I was a little bothered. During the 4hour, i didn\'t ate anything>>I didn\'t eat anything during four hours.
I was really hungry
>>I was really hungry. Actully, everyday i got hungry so, i run in to our school store>>I actually get hungry everyday so, I go to our school store.
(there are alot to eat like ice cream, hamburger )
>>There are a lot of food there like ice cream and hamburgers. But today i don\'t have any money so i didn\'t eat anything
>>Today, I didn\'t have any money to buy some snacks. Before the school lunch time I got so excited.
>>I got so excited before our lunch time. Today\'s menu was bulgogui, [이름]chi, rice, salad, doenjang stew>>Today\'s menu for lunch were bulgeogi, [이름]chi, rice, salad, and dwenjang chigae.
It was really delicious
>>They were very delicious. Actully my school it\'s popular for great lunch>>Actually, my school is famous for its great lunch.
I think i like my school>>I think I like my school.
the lunch is delicious also great friend>>I have great friends to have delicious lunch with.
It\'s hard to wake up in the morning>>It\'s hard to wake up in the morning.
But it\'s great to see my friends
>>It\'s great to see my friends. Also i will tell you about my friends>>Also, I will tell you about my friends.
I have alot of friends but in our class i have 4 friends>>I have a lot of friends but I have only four friends in the class.
They are nice
>>They are very nice. We don\'t lie to each other
>>We don\'t lie to each other. I think i like my friends
>>I think I like my friends. I will stop from here!
>>Correct!
see you in the class
>>I see you in our class.
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