hello teacher~(so so day)

2016-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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Happy friday, teacher! Today, I was really hungry In school class my tummy was really grumbling So, I was little embarrassed During the 4hour, i didn't ate anything I was really hungry Actully, everyday i got hungry so, i run in to our school store (there are alot to eat like ice cream, hamburger ) But today i don't have any money so i didn't eat anything Before the school lunch time I got so excited. Today's menu was bulgogui, [이름]chi, rice, salad, doenjang stew It was really delicious Actully my school it's popular for great lunch I think i like my school the lunch is delicious also great friend It's hard to wake up in the morning But it's great to see my friends Also i will tell you about my friends I have alot of friends but in our class i have 4 friends They are nice We don't lie to each other I think i like my friends I will stop from here! see you in the class

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! Eat whenever you feel hungry. Always feed your hungry stomach. Good to know that you were able to eat delicious food during lunch. I believe that you felt better after. Anyway, have a fabulous weekend! ~Teacher Chloe Happy friday, teacher! >>Happy Friday, teacher!Today, I was really hungry >>I am really hungry right now. In school class my tummy was really grumbling >>My tummy was really grumbling during our class. So, I was little embarrassed >>So, I was a little bothered. During the 4hour, i didn\'t ate anything>>I didn\'t eat anything during four hours. I was really hungry >>I was really hungry. Actully, everyday i got hungry so, i run in to our school store>>I actually get hungry everyday so, I go to our school store. (there are alot to eat like ice cream, hamburger ) >>There are a lot of food there like ice cream and hamburgers. But today i don\'t have any money so i didn\'t eat anything >>Today, I didn\'t have any money to buy some snacks. Before the school lunch time I got so excited. >>I got so excited before our lunch time. Today\'s menu was bulgogui, [이름]chi, rice, salad, doenjang stew>>Today\'s menu for lunch were bulgeogi, [이름]chi, rice, salad, and dwenjang chigae. It was really delicious >>They were very delicious. Actully my school it\'s popular for great lunch>>Actually, my school is famous for its great lunch. I think i like my school>>I think I like my school. the lunch is delicious also great friend>>I have great friends to have delicious lunch with. It\'s hard to wake up in the morning>>It\'s hard to wake up in the morning. But it\'s great to see my friends >>It\'s great to see my friends. Also i will tell you about my friends>>Also, I will tell you about my friends. I have alot of friends but in our class i have 4 friends>>I have a lot of friends but I have only four friends in the class. They are nice >>They are very nice. We don\'t lie to each other >>We don\'t lie to each other. I think i like my friends >>I think I like my friends. I will stop from here! >>Correct! see you in the class >>I see you in our class.  

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