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2017-06-21 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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he grabbed a handful of brushes and looked for on that was the right size then he felt some one come up behind him so he just hurried and rinsed off all the brushes. when he looked behind him art teacher miss cott was smiling at him. miss cott told class mate about jake did the other class mate are made fun of jake jake thought that he is being a teacher’s pet on Monday every teacher said that jake is nice student even a principal. jake doesn’ t wanted to be a teacher’s pet when he got home, he didn’t want to eat snack. before he went bad he just thought it was probably bad Monday next day, was the same too. teachers was being nice to jake. every one teased him and chanted for jake like jake drake jake drake jake doesn’t want to be a teacher’ pet anymore then he decided to be a bad

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he grabbed a handful of brushes and looked for on that was the right size

>>correct
then he felt some one come up behind him so he just hurried and rinsed off all the brushes.

>>correct

when he looked behind him art teacher miss cott was smiling at him.

>>correct

miss cott told class mate about jake did

>>She told the class about what Jake did.
 the other class mate are made fun of jake 

>>The other students made fun of Jake.
 jake thought that he is being a teacher’s pet

>>correct
 on Monday every teacher said that jake is nice student even a principal.

>>correct
 jake doesn’ t wanted to be a teacher’s pet 

>>Jake doesn\'t want to be the teacher\'s pet.
 when he got home, he didn’t want to eat snack. 

>>When he gets home he doesn\'t want to eat his snack.
 before he went bad he just thought it was probably bad Monday 

>>Before he goes to bed he just thought how bad it was.
 next day, was the same too. teachers was being nice to jake.

>>The next day was a routine.
 every one teased him and chanted for jake like jake drake jake drake

>>correct
 jake doesn’t want to be a teacher’ pet anymore 

>>correct
 then he decided to be a bad

>>Then he decided to be bad.

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