hello teacher!~( test is comming)

2016-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Good evening, teacher!I feel really tired today. also, I catched a cold too, I think it’s because the weather is getting cooler. Temperatures in the day and night are really different. During the day, It’s really hot also sunny sky But during the night it’s really cold. Now I want to sleep also, I have a little headache. Anyway, the test is coming. We have a test in October.17, 18. Maybe you think it’s fall from now. But not to me , I have to study 8subject Korean, math, history, science, english, history2, chiness word, Technology and home economics. I have to memorise all thing . So, that’s why I have to study from now. My friends all started to prepare the test, So, i am so worry. Well i have to study;;. I will stop here. and see you in the class~

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear, [이름] ^^   Get well soon my dear! Take care of yourself. Keep yourself warm especially now that you have a cold. Drink a lot of water and take rest after studying. It\'s really hard when there is an upcoming test because you need to study hard. You are a good and a smart student so I think you can do it. Aja! See you!   _Teacher Dianne   Good evening, teacher! >> Correct I feel really tired today. >> Correct also, I catched a cold too, I think it’s because the weather is getting cooler. >> I also caught a cold and I think it\'s because the weather is getting cooler. Temperatures in the day and night are really different. >> The temperatures in the daytime and at night time are really different.During the day, It’s really hot also sunny sky But during the night it’s really cold. >> It’s really hot and sunny during the day, but at night, it’s really cold.Now I want to sleep also, I have a little headache. >> I want to sleep now because I have a mild headache.Anyway, the test is coming. >> Correct >> Or: By the way, the test is nearly approaching.We have a test in October.17, 18. >> We have a test on October 17 and 18.Maybe you think it’s fall from now. >> Maybe you\'re thinking that it is our fall season now.But not to me , I have to study 8subject >> It\'s not for me because I have to study 8 subjects.Korean, math, history, science, english, history2, chiness word, Technology and home economics.>> The subjects are Korean, Math, History, Science, English, History 2, Chinese Word, Technology, and Home Economics. I have to memorise all thing . >> I have to memorize all things.So, that’s why I have to study from now. >> So, I need to study from today.My friends all started to prepare the test, So, i am so worry. >> All my friends started to prepare for the test and I\'m worried about me.Well i have to study;;. >> Well, I have to sudy hard.I will stop here.>> Correct and see you in the class~ >> See you in the next class!

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