hello teahcer
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, teacher!
Tomorrow i have to go to school because my vacation is over.
I think time is really fast.
The vacation started in July.18 but now it's already August.17
I will miss my sweet dream
During the vacation i can sleep what ever i want
But when vacation is over i have to wake up at 6:30
My brother is now on vacation he have to go to school in August.25
I am little jealous of him
On the other hand i can meet my friends and play with them
Actully i am little nervous and excite to go to school
Because i am thinking everyone will be change like their hair or tall, weight
Of course during the vacation i met my friends but not all of in school
So i am curious about them
Maybe take time for self-examination about vacation
I didn't do my best also i didn't listen to my parents
I am sorry mom, dad from now on i will do my best
I will stop from here~
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Good afternoon!
Yes, you are right!
You should do your best in everything you do.
When you fail, it is just okay.
Motivate yourself even more.
Aim to be better!
You can do it!
~Teacher Chloe
Good morning, teacher!
>>Correct! Tomorrow i have to go to school because my vacation is over.
>>My vacation is soon be over. I am going back to school tomorrow. I think time is really fast.
>>I think that time is really fast. The vacation started in July.18 but now it\'s already August.17
>>Our vacation started last July 18 and I didn\'t notice that it is already August 17. I will miss my sweet dream
>>I will miss my sweet dreams. During the vacation i can sleep what ever i want
>>On vacations, I can sleep whenever I want. But when vacation is over i have to wake up at 6:30
>>On school days, I have to wake up at 6:30. My brother is now on vacation he have to go to school in August.25 >>My brother is still on vacation. He will go back to school on August 25.
I am little jealous of him>>I am a little jealous of him.
OR:>>I envy him a little.
On the other hand i can meet my friends and play with them>>On a second though, I am happy that I am going to meet my friends and play with them.
Actully i am little nervous and excite to go to school
>>Actually, I am a little nervous and excited to to go school. Because i am thinking everyone will be change like their hair or tall, weight
>>I am thinking that everyone of us has changed physically.Of course during the vacation i met my friends but not all of in school
>>On vacations, I meet some of my friends. So i am curious about them
>>So, I am curious about my other friends. Maybe take time for self-examination about vacation
>>Vacations are the time for self examination and improvement. I didn\'t do my best also i didn\'t listen to my parents>>I didn\'t do my best to be better. I didn\'t even listen to my parents.
I am sorry mom, dad from now on i will do my best
>>I am sorry mom and dad. From now on, I will do my best. I will stop from here~
>>I will stop from here.
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