hello there!

2011-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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hi!! today, i was very busy. but, still i have lots of thing to do. after writing this composition, i will have to find information of peru for my report. because of academy in soeul, i also will be busy tommorow.:( see you!

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I hope that you can find information about your report. We know how busy you are but we are thankful that you take time for your English class with your teacher. Please capitalize the letter after a period or at the beginning of the sentence. Take care always! T.Faye   Here are the corrections to your composition: hi!!>>Correct!today, i was very busy.>>I was very busy.but, still i have lots of thing to do.>>But I still have a lot of things to do.after writing this composition, >>Correct!i will have to find information of peru for my report.>>I will have to find some information about Peru for my report.because of academy in soeul, i also will be busy tommorow.:(>>Because of my Academy in Seoul, I will also be busy tomorrow. see you! >>Correct!

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