hello there^^Klein^^
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A peaceful morning to you, Kirk!
I can say that I had a great time yesterday.
After work, I went window shopping with my good friend.
What exactly did you do yesterday, Kirk?
You mentioned that you went to see a theatrical play with girls.
Did I get it right? Was it like a date with a lot of girls, or the characters in the play are little girls?
Well, I am going to clarify this one to you in class.
Tell me more about this, please, because it sounds interesting.
Honestly, I love watching theatrical plays. Way back in college, I used to see a lot of plays and I even tried joining one but I sort of backed out because all members of that troupe are bound to be activists, and I know that it is not the path that I want to take wholeheartedly.
Anyways, to light up the mood here, I\'m so glad that you agree with my opinion!
I am truly fond of using euphemisms and I can\'t wait to share more with you, so we can bank on our English vocabulary.
And Kirk, my question is actually hypothetical. I don\'t think that any of your friends vilify or even try to vilify you behind your back.
You are such a nice person and so, people around you definitely adore you!
I\'ll catch you later, Kirk, so please wait for my call.
_Klein
How are your today.^^
>>How are you today?
>>How is your day?
Did you have some special activities during a day.
>>Did you have some special activities during the day?
I went to playhouse for watch funny theater with girls.^^haha
>>I went to a playhouse to watch a funny play with girls.
It was very funny theater, to be made love story.
>>It was a funny theatrical play, to be made into a love story.
But, i don\'t remember this theater\'s tittle.^^;;
>>But I can\'t remember this theatrical play\'s title.
Anyway, Today was nice day^^
>>Anyway, this day is a nice one for me.
Home work.
>>Homework [one word]
What are you going to do if you learned that your friends vilify you behind your back?
Maybe,If My friends vilify me behind my back,I am going to do to think \"My relationship is not good yet\".
>>Maybe, if my friends vilify me behind my back, I am going to think that my relationship with them is not yet good.
>>Perhaps, if my friends vilify me behind my back, I am going to think that my relationship with them is not good enough.
And I will change my character everyones like me.
>>And I will change my character so everyone will like me.
>>And I will change my character to please everyone.
>>I will also change my character to please them.
It is my answer.^^
>>Correct
OR >> This is my answer.
PS : I agree your opinion.
>>I agree with your opinion.
Euphemisms are very important things about our life.
>>Euphemisms are very important in our life.
Because, We know that being derogatory to a person\'s dignity is very rude.
>>This is because we know that derogating other people\'s dignity is very rude.
And because, It is a standard of judgment to our humanity.
>>Also, it is a standard of judgment in humanity.
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