Hello there! Teacher Sheila~
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Sheila
Happy thurday~ Teacher Sheila~ I\'m [이름] hyun, but you can call me Tierney. Nice to know you.
Actually, before class, i had prepare lesson 1(She\'s the best).
I studied English for 3 years in middle school and 3 years in high school.
But I use translator when I write English and when I speak English.
Translator... The translator has a bad grammar. And I\'m so ashamed to use the translator.
So I applied for the teacher\'s class. I will not use the translator from now on.
I will learn from your feedback.
Thanks a lot.
(homework) What makes you happy?
I think what is happy? Happy will be take place not far from here.
If you want to be happy, find satisfaction in small things in your life. (This sentence copy) i think so.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tierney!
Thank you for making the time to make your homework tonight!
Thank you for telling me things about yourself as well. I really appreciate it.
We did not have the book today because I wanted to know you better before we start the book together so that I can have a little background about you.
Don\'t worry because we will start the book tomorrow. ^_^
~Teacher Sheila
>>I think, what is happiness? Happiness will take place not far from here.
OR>>I am thinking, what is happiness? Happiness will be taken place not far from here.
If you want to be happy, find satisfaction in small things in your life.
>>CORRECT
(This sentence copy) i think so.
>>I copied this sentence and I agree to it.
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