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Consideration of Korean government’s Finance Direction

The number of employment in July was only 5000 and income of low group decreased 7.6% in the same period.

>> The number of those employed in July was only 5000 and the earnings of the low-income group decreased by 7.6% in the same period.

That is so shocking economic indicator. But this is not because of the present Government’s policy. the present Government’s finance policy needs at least 1 years for being effective. This statistic was more influenced by car, shipbuilding’s restructuring etc than the minimum wage.

>>That is a very shocking economic indicator but this is not because of the present Government\'s policy as their finance policy needs at least 1 year before it can be evaluated for being effective. This statistic was more influenced by the automotive and shipbuilding industries\' restructuring, etc. than the minimum wage.

 Since Korea can’t do Export - driven growth after 2008 global finance crisis, Korea’s export has lost the way to drive domestic finace growth as China has grown up, global proctectionism trade that occurred by Trump, high wage and high regulation.

>> Since Korea can\'t do export-driven growth after the 2008 global finance crisis, the country’s export has lost the way to drive domestic finance growth as China has grown, global protectionism trade led by Trump, high wage, and high regulation.  [Consider revising this as the thought is confusing.]