hello this is Sangwook !!

2016-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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i am writing to you i need to ask you something i am surprised that teacher didn't visit the Korea summer vacation of this year is going to visit your country . Do you recommend your country for you? i go to bathroom to shower bye bye

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Hello Sangwook! ^^   I would recommend that you visit the Philippines especially Boracay. The beaches there are awesome. Although, I do hope the weather would be good when you visit because July and August is the start of the rainy season (장마철). ~~~   I\'ll talk to you on Friday.   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     i am writing to you i need to ask you something >> I am writing to you because I need to ask you something. i am surprised that teacher didn\'t visit the Korea >> I am surprised that you haven\'t visited Korea. summer vacation of this year is going to visit your country . >> This summer vacation, I will be visiting your country. Do you recommend your country for you? >> Do you recommend that I visit your country? i go to bathroom to shower bye bye >> I have to go to the bathroom to take a shower. Bye bye.

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