hello this is Sangwook !!
학생이 쓴 원문
i am writing to you
i need to ask you something
i am surprised that teacher didn't visit the Korea
summer vacation of this year is going to visit your country .
Do you recommend your country for you?
i go to bathroom to shower bye bye
강사 첨삭
Hello Sangwook! ^^
I would recommend that you visit the Philippines especially Boracay. The beaches there are awesome. Although, I do hope the weather would be good when you visit because July and August is the start of the rainy season (장마철). ~~~
I\'ll talk to you on Friday.
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
i am writing to you i need to ask you something
>> I am writing to you because I need to ask you something.
i am surprised that teacher didn\'t visit the Korea
>> I am surprised that you haven\'t visited Korea.
summer vacation of this year is going to visit your country .
>> This summer vacation, I will be visiting your country.
Do you recommend your country for you?
>> Do you recommend that I visit your country?
i go to bathroom to shower bye bye
>> I have to go to the bathroom to take a shower. Bye bye.
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