hello this is [이름] it's my homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Happy wednesday, teacher
I got up early in the morning. actually
I got up in dawn at 4 a.m to see my favorate soccer team's match!
the name of the team is Chealse
they are usually gamming on London. so I just got up early
I'm very Happy because my surportteam won the game.
teacher what kind of sport do you like??
And I found my question in a text book
but maybe I should ask next time,because of exceeding capacity
bye!
What "H word" is a tool used to knock nails in with? hammer
Another word to describe a good-looking man is HULK
It's worn on your head for either fashion or warmth. hat
This "H word" means you really, really don't like something or someone. hate
The joints where the legs join the body are called the hip
A holiday newly-weds have after their wedding is called a honeymoon
If you are ill or have an accident, you would go to a hospital
How many years are there in a Century? hundred
A typhoon that originates in the Atlantic is called a huricane
The opposite of heaven is he
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]^^
Thank you for sharing a lot of things about you.^^ You did a nice job!I am glad that you are always doing your homework and you are comfortable talking in English.^^ Good job! I am really happy that you are determined to speak in English fluently.^^ Please go over the corrections for your improvement.Thank you for being a kind student of mine.^^See you tomorrow!Goodnight!Teacher NIna
Here are my corrections for you:
Happy wednesday, teacher
>>>Happy Thursday Teacher.(It\'s already Thursday^^)I got up early in the morning.
>>>I got up early this morning.
actuallyI got up in dawn at 4 a.m to see my favorate soccer team\'s match!
>>>Actually, I got up at dawn to see my favorite soccer team\'s match!OR >>>Actually, I got up at 4 a.m. to see my favorite soccer team\'s match!the name of the team is Chealse
>>>The name of the team is Chealse.
OR >>> The team\'s name is Chealse.they are usually gamming on London. so I just got up early
>>>They are usually playing at London so I got up early.I\'m very Happy because my surportteam won the game.
>>>I\'m very happy because the team that I support won the game.teacher what kind of sport do you like??
>>>Teacher, what kind of sport do you like? And I found my question in a text book but maybe I should ask next time,because of exceeding capacity
>>>And I found that questions in a textbook. Maybe I should ask next time because I\'m almost exceeding the capacity of this composition.bye!>>>Bye!What \"H word\" is a tool used to knock nails in with? hammer
>>>Correct! Another word to describe a good-looking man is HULK
>>>Handsome.
OR >>>[이름], Hulk is not handsome.It\'s worn on your head for either fashion or warmth. hat
>>>Correct! This \"H word\" means you really, really don\'t like something or someone. hate
>>>Correct! The joints where the legs join the body are called the hip
>>>Correct! A holiday newly-weds have after their wedding is called a honeymoon
>>>Correct! If you are ill or have an accident, you would go to a hospital
>>>Correct! How many years are there in a Century? hundred
>>>Correct! A typhoon that originates in the Atlantic is called a huricane
>>>Hurricane.
>>>I think you committed a typographic error here.The opposite of heaven is he
>>>Hell.
>>>I think you\'ve exceeded the maximum capacity here.
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