Hello~ Tina

2012-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello Tina. Now is Sunday morning. I have been drinking beer all night long yesterday. Because I accidentally met my best friend in Busan. I was so happy to meet him. He said that his university is in Busan. We talked each other all night long. It was so great time. So I was a little tired now. AH~~ -_- hahaha Anyway here is my homework. From the questions. 1. Does peter go to party? 2. Can Mary ride a ski? 3. Does teacher hand out the books? 4. Is the Pat clever boy? 5. Does the monkey take the banana? Teacher I can't attend my class on Monday. Because my time will set out at 10 o'clock in morning. So I will have to go train station early morning. I already submit my request of delay to website. I,m sorry about that I can't attend my class. So see you next Tuesday! Good bye~

강사 첨삭

Good morning James!!!

Happy Monday!! ^^

I\'m so happy that you did great over the weekend of of course for having some time so spend with your love ones.

I hope that you will have enough time to study English as well!^^ And I could get to see that you are doing your best!

Okay I will see you on Tuesday then. ^^ 

Take care and Good luck!

~~~T.Tina~~~

Hello Tina.

>>>Hello Tina, 

Now is Sunday morning.

>>>It\'s Sunday morning. 

I have been drinking beer all night long yesterday.

>>>Correct!

Because I accidentally met my best friend in Busan.

>>>Correct!

I was so happy to meet him.

>>>Correct!

He said that his university is in Busan.

>>>Correct!

We talked each other all night long.

>>>We talked with each other all night long. 

It was so great time.

>>>It was such a great time.

So I was a little tired now.

>>>So I\'m a little tired now.

AH~~ -_- hahaha
Anyway here is my homework.
>>>Correct!
From the questions.
1. Does peter go to party?

>>>  Does Peter go to the party?  
2. Can Mary ride a ski?

>>> Can Mary ski?
3. Does teacher hand out the books?

>>>Correct!
4. Is the Pat clever boy?

>>>Is Pat a clever boy?  
5. Does the monkey take the banana?
>>>Correct!
Teacher I can\'t attend my class on Monday.

>>>Correct!

Because my time will set out at 10 o\'clock in morning.

>>>Correct! 

So I will have to go train station early morning.

>>>So I will have to go to the train station early. 

I already submit my request of delay to website.

>>>I already sent my request to put my class on hold. 

I,m sorry about that I can\'t attend my class.

>>>I\'m sorry that I can\'t attend my class. 

So see you next Tuesday! Good bye~ 

>>>So I\'ll see you on Tuesday! Good bye ~

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