Hello~ Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello James,
It\'s really nice reading something from you. I really do appreciate whenever you get to share your activities or your thoughts. I appreciate it so much and I am happy reading it! It\'s good that you are having a good time at work. It is really so important that you are happy with everything that you are busy with. Because when you are happy with your job, then you will have a good job! I\'m happy too that you have some time to read my messages for you. Yes! My main purpose is to inspire my students. I really love to inspire people because they are my inspiration too. ^^ I really love teaching James. It really makes me happy to know when my student do appreciate me! And about that TOEIC test sample we had yesterday, of course we can have another one for today\'s class. Just please feel free to always suggest something about our class. I really want you to feel comfortable! ^^
So you have a new cute co-worker. ^^ I hope that you two will work well together and become good friends! ^^ It\'s really nice meeting new people. ^^
See you later James!! Keep up the good work!!^^
~~~T.Tina~~~
Good evening~
I just finished my part time job.
>>>Correct!
Today\'s work was so fun and excited.
>>>Today at work was so fun and exciting!
Because my boss hired new staff who was so cute.
>>>Because my boss hired a new staff who is so cute.
My boss said to me
>>>My boss teased me
\" Hey James! I hired a pretty staff for you HA! HA! HA!\"
>>>Correct!
Today was so great time to me.
>>>It was such a great time for me.
And now let\'s talk about our class.
>>>Correct!
Today you tried to TOEIC test for me in our class time.
>>>He had a TOEIC test exercise during our class time.
It was such a great experience.
>>>Correct!
It was first time that I tried to TOEIC speaking test.
>>>It was my first time to try a TOEIC speaking test.
I just have studied listening and reading.
>>>I\'ve just studied listening and reading.
I think we will do TOEIC speaking test every second day.
>>>Let\'s have another TOEIC speaking test tomorrow.
How about your think?
>>>What do you think?
Here is homework for today.
1. Go to upstairs.
>>>Correct!
2. Don\'t
swim in the lake.
>>>Correct!
3. Do your homework.
>>>Correct!
4. Don\'t play football in the
yard.
>>>Correct!
5. Brush your teeth.
>>>Correct!
6. Don\'t talk during the lesson.
>>>Correct!
7. Don\'t
feed animals in the zoo
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I think, you have been always giving great speech to
me.
>>>I think you have always been giving great messages to me.
I always thank to about your speech.
>>>I am so thankful for your messages.
Sometimes your speech inspired me.
>>>Correct!
Anyway Good night Tina~
>>>Correct!
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