Hello Tina!

2012-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Hello Tina~ Happy Monday! I'm doing my homework in subway that is running to travel agency. HA! HA! HA! I hope that you will be happy and doing actively during hole weekdays. I want to say thank to you for about your commendation in my class and you have always written good speech for me. I think I will make the note of Tina's wise saying. Today Tina's wise saying: 'Just always happy with all things that you are doing and for sure that you will never feel so tired with your daily task.' Anyway see you tomorrow! Homework for Today. 1. Vinegar - N 2. Flame - N 3. Poetry - Y 4. Applause - N 5. Thought - N 6. Banana - Y

강사 첨삭

Good morning James!!! 

You\'ve really brighten up my day!! I feel so good and happy reading your messages for me too. ^^ I am happy that I am inspiring you and at the same time I want you to know that with a kind of student like you, it also is uplifting and you inspire me to strive harder to be a good teacher to all of my students!!^^ They have to thank you then. ^^ Yes it is so true right? When we are not happy with the things that we are doing then we\'ll never get to do it properly. So make sure James that don\'t just simply keep on deciding using you mind, you have to use both. Do what you think is right and at the same time do it because you are happy about it!! ^^

See you in class later!! You did great! ^^

~~~T.Tina~~~ 

Hello Tina~ Happy Monday!

>>>Correct!! 

I\'m doing my homework in subway that is running to travel agency. HA! HA! HA!

>>>I am doing my homework in the subway, I\'m on my way to the travel agency. 

I hope that you will be happy and doing actively during hole weekdays.

>>>I hope that you will be happy and perform actively for the whole weekdays. 

I want to say thank to you for about your commendation in my class and you have always written good speech for me.

>>>I want to say thank you for your commendation during our class and for always writing good messages for me. 

I think I will make the note of Tina\'s wise saying.

>>>I think I will make a note of Tina\'s wise saying. 

Today Tina\'s wise saying:

>>>Tina\'s wise saying for today: 

\'Just always happy with all things that you are doing and for sure that you will never feel so tired with your daily task.\' Anyway see you tomorrow!

>>>Correct!! 

Homework for Today.

1. Vinegar - N

>>>Correct!! 

2. Flame - N

>>>Correct!! 

3. Poetry - Y

>>>Correct!! 

4. Applause - N

>>>Correct!! 

5. Thought - N

>>>Correct!! 

6. Banana - Y

>>>Correct!! 

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