Hello Tina!

2012-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Anne

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Hello Tina~! I just finished for making a reservation for my trip. I feel so good when I thought that I really go to the Europe for trip. It may be awesome definitely! Oh I have to practice speaking English more harder than before! Tomorrow I will have to bring my father up from airport at 5 :00 AM. I think is awfully tired. I'm just going to sleep as soon as I finish my class and keep going to bed until I go my part time job at 6:00 PM Here is my homework. 1. He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct. 2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation. 3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements. 4. The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awful still. 5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The mas was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous. Have a nice day Tina! It is time to go my part time job.

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 Hello there! Great Wednesday evening to you! A job well done in your homework! You\'re amazing. Thank you so much for sharing your secret. I learned a lot. I\'m glad to hear you\'re enjoying our classes. I look forward for a fun and educational class with you again tomorrow!See you soon and take care always! ^^ ~T. Tina^^ Here are my corrections for you: Hello Tina~! >> Correct I just finished for making a reservation for my trip. >> I just finished making the reservation for my trip. >> OR I\'m just done with my reservation for my trip. I feel so good when I thought that I really go to the Europe for trip. >> I feel so good when I thought of going to the European Country for my next trip. It may be awesome definitely! >> That would be definitely awesome! Oh I have to practice speaking English more harder than before!>> Correct Tomorrow I will have to bring my father up from airport at 5 :00 AM. >> Correct >> OR Tomorrow I will have to bring my father up from the airport at 5 :00 AM. I think is awfully tired. >> DID YOU MEAN: I think he will be extremely tired. I\'m just going to sleep as soon as I finish my class and keep going to bed until I go my part time job at 6:00 PM. >> I will go to sleep as soon as I finished my class and continue to sleep until 6:00 PM to attend my part time job. Here is my homework.>> Correct1. He correctly defined the terms. The answer sounded correct. >> Correct2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quickly to any situation.>> Correct 3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurements.>> Correct 4. The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awful still.>> Correct 5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The mas was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous.>> CorrectHave a nice day Tina! It is time to go my part time job. >> Correct (Take Care)

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