Hello Tina!

2012-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon Tina! It is happy Monday. I wish you have a great whole week days. I thought that it is helpful to me to practice make a sentence with idiom when I saw your opinion. So I made a decision to arrange all idiom that is written in 'Today's correction' and make a sentence with them. I'm going to try to use it in our class. Anyway thank you to help me for raising my English skill. Have a nice day! Here is my homework. 1. He correctly defined the terms. the answer sounded correct. 2. She quickly adjusted the fees. She adapted quick to any situation. 3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurement. 4. The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still 5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous.

강사 첨삭


Hello James!! ^^ 
You made a good job!! Please continue with your enthusiasm in studying English and for sure that you will improve your skills. Thank you you too for the trust and for always listening actively and attentively during our class. I hope that we will always have a good and interesting class together James. ^^ 
Just go over the correction and I am pretty sure that you will realize that you should have gotten the right answers.^^
Anyway, it is merely a minor slip.
I also wish that you will have a happy week as well. Take care. ^^ 
T-Tina^^
Good afternoon Tina!
>> Correct
It is happy Monday.
>> It is a happy Monday.
I wish you have a great whole week days.
>> I wish you will have a great week.
I thought that it is helpful to me to practice make a sentence with idiom when I saw your opinion.
>> I thought that it is helpful for me to practice making sentences with idioms when I read your opinion.
So I made a decision to arrange all idiom that is written in \'Today\'s correction\' and make a sentence with them.
>> So I have decided to arrange all the idioms written in \"Today\'s Correction\" and make a sentence with them.
I\'m going to try to use it in our class.

>> Correct
Anyway thank you to help me for raising my English skill.
>> Anyway, thank you for helping raise the level of my English skill.
Have a nice day!

>> Correct
Here is my homework.

>> Correct
1. He correctly defined the terms. the answer sounded correct
.
>> Correct [capitalization]
2. She quickly adjusted the fees.
>> Correct
She adapted quick to any situation.

>> She adapted quickly to any situation.
3. He measured the floor exactly. They proved to be perfectly exact measurement.

>> Correct
4. The stillness of the tomb was awful. The tomb was awfully still

>> Correct
5. It was a dangerous lake to swim in. The man was dangerously drunk. The gas smelled dangerous.
>> Correct

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