Hello~ Tina 'ㅁ'

2012-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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It is happy Wednesday! The week already has passed away more than half. Only two days left, the weekend is coming soon. SO let spend our time briskly for the weekend. I have been racking my brain to come up with the words what I want to say in our class, but sometimes I couldn't think of the words. So I have been very stuffy of I couldn't say what I want. Maybe you have been stuffy too. Please understand me. I try to do my best. HO HO HO I will go to library to read magazines that were written by English to follow your advice. Have a nice day Tina! Homework. 1. Andrea knows the material very good. She always treats us well. 2. You must spend payments regularly. We deal on a strict cash basis. 3. The mechanic's tool were good. The foreman said that his work was well done. 4. She worked carefully with the sick child. She was a very careful worker. 5. He did not pass the course as easily as he thought he would. 6. I find this novel very interesting. It was interestingly written.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thank you very much for making your homework. Good job! You got a perfect score! Anyway, please don't worry too much. I am here to help you out, remember? I totally understand that you sometimes grasp some words, and that's really fine. I do hope you'd get to find a good reading material. Let me know about it tomorrow. Tae care! See you!

-T. Tina-

It is happy Wednesday!

>> It is a happy Wednesday!

The week already has passed away more than half.

>> We're in the middle of the week again.

Only two days left, the weekend is coming soon.

>> Just 2 more days and we'll have the weekend again.

SO let spend our time briskly for the weekend.

>> So, let's spend our time briskly to finally have the weekend.

 I have been racking my brain to come up with the words what I want to say in our class, but sometimes I couldn\'t think of the words.

>> I have been thinking hard of words to express my ideas in class, but sometimes, I just run out and can't think of any.

So I have been very stuffy of I couldn\'t say what I want.

>> I'm bothered that I can not fully express what I want to say or share.

Maybe you have been stuffy too.

>> Maybe you're having some difficulties, too.

Please understand me.

>> Correct.

I try to do my best. HO HO HO

>> I am trying to do my best. Ho ho ho

I will go to library to read magazines that were written by English to follow your advice.

>> I will go to library to read magazines that were written in English as what you have advised me.

Have a nice day Tina!

>> Have a nice day, Tina!

 Homework.

 1. Andrea knows the material very good. She always treats us well.

 >> Correct.

2. You must spend payments regularly. We deal on a strict cash basis.

  >> Correct.

3. The mechanic\'s tool were good. The foreman said that his work was well done.

  >> Correct.

4. She worked carefully with the sick child. She was a very careful worker.

  >> Correct.

5. He did not pass the course as easily as he thought he would.

>> Correct.

 6. I find this novel very interesting. It was interestingly written.

>> Correct.

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