Hello Tina!

2012-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

It is a happy Thursday again! Just one more day and we'll have the weekend again! WoW!! Yesterday, I went to library to borrow magazines or books written in English as what you have advised me. But the magazines couldn't be lent and the books couldn't attract me. So I considered for about this things. And I decided to buy basketball magazine written in English. If I bought that magazine, I could concentrate any other magazines and be interested in English. So I will go to bookstore to buy the magazine. Anyway Have a nice day! Here is my homework. 1. I want an apple from that basket. 2. The church on the corner is progressive. 3. Miss. [Name] speaks Chinese. 4. I borrowed a pencil from your pile of pencils and pens. 5. One of the students said, "The professor is late today".

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Thank you for your composition today! Here are the corrections. Please be guided. Take care and have a good day!

T. Tina

It is a happy Thursday again!

>> Correct

Just one more day and we\'ll have the weekend again!

>> Correct

Wow!!

>> Correct

Yesterday, I went to library to borrow magazines or books written in English as what you have advised me.

>> Yesterday, I went to the library to borrow English magazines and books as you advised me.

But the magazines couldn\'t be lent and the books couldn\'t attract me.

>> Correct

So I considered for about this things.

>> So I had to re-consider. 

And I decided to buy basketball magazine written in English.

>> Correct

If I bought that magazine, I could concentrate any other magazines and be interested in English.

>> If I bought that magazine, I could concentrate on any other magazines and be interested in English. 

So I will go to bookstore to buy the magazine.

>> So I will go to the bookstore to buy that magazine. 

Anyway, have a nice day!

>> Correct

Here is my homework.

>> Correct

1. I want an apple from that basket.

>> Correct

2. The church on the corner is progressive.

>> Correct

3. Miss. [Name] speaks Chinese.

>> Correct

4. I borrowed a pencil from your pile of pencils and pens.

>> Correct

5. One of the students said, \"The professor is late today\".

>> Correct

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