Hello Tina!

2012-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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It's a happy Friday. At last the happy weekend come over again! I hope that you will have such a great weekend! Yesterday, finally a foreigner customer visited our restaurant. I made a song and dance about the fact that he visited. I always have expected that foreigner customer visit our restaurant someday. I was very happy and nervous when I thought I could talked with him face to face. But the happy moment had gone when his girl friend come over to him. His girl friend explained about sushi instead of me. So I couldn't talk with him. As a result, I talked to him only one word that is 'excuse me' that is all what I said. Oh god ㅠㅠ Anyway have a nice weekend. See you on Monday! Here is a homework. 1. Eli likes to play the Volleyball. 2. I bought an umbrella to go out in the rain. 3. My daughter is learning to play the violin at her school. 4. Please give me a cake that is on the counter. 5. I lived on the main street when I first came to town.

강사 첨삭


Hello Jame!
Thank you for doing your homework.^^ Thank you, too, for sharing this funny story.^^ Don\'t you worry you will be talking to a lot of foreigners once you get there in Europe. ^^ I am rally excited for you!! Please take as many photos as you can and maybe you can share it by sharing here on the website. ^^ Just always do your very best to study English. Use it and practice it everyday. 
Please go over the corrections if you have some time. ^^ 
Have a great weekend! See you on Monday!! ^^ 
T.Tina^^
It\'s a happy Friday.
>> Correct
At last the happy weekend come over again!
>> At last, a happy weekend is coming again!
I hope that you will have such a great weekend!

>> I hope that you will have a great weekend!
Yesterday, finally a foreigner customer visited our restaurant.
>> Yesterday, a customer, who is a foreigner, finally visited our restaurant.
I made a song and dance about the fact that he visited.
>> I made a song and a dance about his visit.
I always have expected that foreigner customer visit our restaurant someday.
>> I always have expected that a foreigner will visit our restaurant someday,
I was very happy and nervous when I thought I could talked with him face to face.
>> I was very happy and nervous, all at the same time, thinking that I could get to talk to him face to face.
But the happy moment had gone when his girl friend come over to him.
>> But the happy moment faded away when his girl friend came over to his side.
His girl friend explained about sushi instead of me.
>> His girld friend explained what the sushi is instead of me.
So I couldn\'t talk with him.
>> So I couldn\'t talk to him.
 As a result, I talked to him only one word that is \'excuse me\' that is all what I said.
>> As a result, I only told him, \"Excuse me.\" That was all.
Oh god ㅠㅠ Anyway, have a nice weekend. See you on Monday!

>> Correct
Here is a homework.

>> Here is my homework.
1. Eli likes to play the Volleyball.
>> Eli likes to play volleyball.
2. I bought an umbrella to go out in the rain.

>> Correct
3. My daughter is learning to play the violin at her school.

>> Correct
4. Please give me a cake that is on the counter.

>> Correct
5. I lived on the main street when I first came to town.
>> I lived on Main Street when I first came to town.

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