Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
It's a happy Monday again! I hope that you had such a great weekend. Let's do our respective work briskly. Did you remember that I said about a girl that my friend introduced me but she lives far away from our town, so I forgave a date with her. But! suddenly she left a message for me in last Friday night. She said let's have a dinner in Saturday. I decided to meet her for my friend's sincerity. Unexpectedly we had such a great time! She really bright and diligent woman and she looked more pretty than when I saw her picture. We talked each other for about two hours and I suggested her to meet next weekend. I hope that our relation ship go well. HA! HA!
Here is my homework.
1. I walk to the amusement park.
2, Pat drove Mike to the airport.
3. Glenn almost fell into the river.
4. The waitress noticed that there was no more Diet Pepsi in Marty's glass.
5. Lee and Sarah took the bus that was heading toward the university.
6. Mary Sue jumped onto the stage and danced.
Have a nice day!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon. Wow! You really had time with your date. I\'m so happy for you. Anyway, good job on your homework. keep it up!
---Teacher Tina---
It\'s a happy Monday again!
>> Correct.
I hope that you had such a great weekend.
>> Correct.
Let\'s do our respective work briskly.
>> Correct.
Did you remember that I said about a girl that my friend introduced me but she lives far away from our town, so I forgave a date with her.
>> Do you remember about the girl I mentioned who was introduced by my friend? She lives in a far place so I didn\'t date her.
But! suddenly she left a message for me in last Friday night.
>> Correct.
>> OR: But she left a message for me in last Friday night.
She said let\'s have a dinner in Saturday.
>> She asked me to have dinner with her last Saturday.
I decided to meet her for my friend\'s sincerity.
>> Correct.
Unexpectedly we had such a great time!
>> Correct.
She really bright and diligent woman and she looked more pretty than when I saw her picture.
>> She\'s really a bright and a diligent woman and she looked prettier in person.
We talked each other for about two hours and I suggested her to meet next weekend.
>> We talked for about two hours and I asked her if we could meet again next weekend.
I hope that our relation ship go well. HA! HA!>> I hope that our relationship will go well.Here is my homework.1. I walk to the amusement park.>> Correct.
2, Pat drove Mike to the airport.>> Correct.
3. Glenn almost fell into the river.
>> Correct.
>>OR: Glenn almost fell in the river.4. The waitress noticed that there was no more Diet Pepsi in Marty\'s glass.
>> Correct.5. Lee and Sarah took the bus that was heading toward the university.
>> Correct.6. Mary Sue jumped onto the stage and danced.
>> Correct.
>> OR: Mary Sue jumped on the stage and danced.Have a nice day!
>> Correct.
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