Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
It's a happy Wednesday again! Yesterday my friend left a message when I was working in restaurant. She said one of our friend's father died that he was in same class with me when I was second grade of high school student. I was really really sorry about that story when I heard that. So I plane to go to funeral with my high school friends after I will finish my part time job. Oh I will have to cheer him up to go there.
Here is my homework.
1. What's the time? It's ten past twelve.
2. Put the CD in its place, please.
3. My hometown is famous for its old buildings.
4. I can't find my budgie, I think it's flown away.
5. Peter, it's never too late to learn how to play piano.
6. The wolf made its way close to our house.
강사 첨삭
I\'m terribly sorry to hear that news. I hope that your friend will be fine. Losing someone important in our lives is never easy.
Anyway, take it easy this day. Smile always and I\'ll be talking to you soon! ^^
T. Tina
It\'s a happy Wednesday again!
>>Correct!
Yesterday my friend left a message when I was working in restaurant.
>>Yesterday my friend left a message while I was working in the restaurant.
She said one of our friend\'s father died that he was in same class with me when I was second grade of high school student.
>>She said the father of one of our class mates from high school died.
I was really really sorry about that story when I heard that.
>>Correct!
So I plane to go to funeral with my high school friends after I will finish my part time job.
>>So I plan to go to the funeral with my high school friends after I finish my part time job.
Oh I will have to cheer him up to go there.>>Oh I will go there to cheer him up.Here is my homework.>>Correct!1. What\'s the time? It\'s ten past twelve.
>>Correct!2. Put the CD in its place, please.
>>Correct!3. My hometown is famous for its old buildings.
>>Correct!4. I can\'t find my budgie, I think it\'s flown away.
>>Correct!
5. Peter, it\'s never too late to learn how to play piano.
>>Correct!6. The wolf made its way close to our house.
>>Correct!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.