Hello Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon! Thank you for dropping by at the composition board. Just check my corrections please. Have a great day!
----Teacher Tina----
It was a happy Thursday again!
>>Correct.
Just one more day and we have the happy weekend!
>> Just one more day and it\'s already the weekend.
Yesterday I stopped by the funeral of the father of one of my class mates when I was the second grade of high school student after I finish my job.
>> Yesterday, I dropped by at the funeral of the father of one of my classmates in second year high school.
It was good to cheer him up with my friends.
>>Correct.
Actually I\'m not close to him.
>>Correct.
I\'ve not seen him for about four years.
>>Correct.
But I thought that it was very important and it was my duty to visit his father\'s funeral as a friend.
>>Correct.
>> OR: As a friend, I think that it was my duty to visit his father\'s funeral.
May be, he must visit for me and cheer me up if I were in the same situation.
>> Maybe he would also visit me and cheer me up if I were in the same situation.
I think, the sadness must be shared by acquaintance.
>> I think that it\'s good to be with an acquaintance when you\'re sad.
Have a nice day Tina!
Here is my homework.
>>Correct.
1. For as long as I can remember.
>>Correct.
2. For three days.
>>Correct.
3. Since my childhood.
>>Correct.
4. For ten years.
>>Correct.
5. Since I was young.
>>Correct.
6. For new year\'s Eve.
>> Since New Year\'s Eve.
7. For Wednesday.
>> Since Wednesday.
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